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PostSubject: Keiser W. Rotiro   Keiser W. Rotiro Icon_minitimeSun May 01, 2011 10:25 am

Name: Keiser W. "steel hands" Rotiro

Age:14

Bounty: 6,550,000 will increase

Species:human (most people think he is an demon)

Occupation: first mate of The Archangel Pirates

Allegiance: Flaming Sword Pirates

Home: East Blue

Appearance:http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&section=&q=gangster+anime+boy#/d34t5tq

History: He grew up with his older brother Gabriel and din't know his parents. He lived in a small village where a pirate crew stopped after they went to the new world for six months. Navy crewman came hunting the these pirates and thus attacked the village. The Navymen came he tried to fight the navy crew he killed one navy man. He also found a devil fruit, the gravity gravity fruit. He also obtain the Bleedout from a famous fighter. He has sworn never to kill anyone again. He will put so much force of gravity on someone, to paralyze them. If they threaten a friend or family member. Rotiro out of rage fled with his brother to become pirates. Over the years, Rotiro has gotten into a lot of fights and is now an expert at street fighting. He earned his title as first mate for all the Navy he has defeated in one on one duels. His brother and him found crewmates. They sailed to an island that had a city pillaged by pirates. They defeated the pirates. He earned himself a bounty of 1,000,000 beris. After that, the crew tookdown a highly protected naval base. He defeated about 70 navy men and one powerful captain which earned him a bouty of 6,550,000 beris.

Personality:He i very cocky like SUPER cocky. He likes to party and have a good time. You can't easily anger him, but when you do your DEAD. he always seems to get in fights somehow. He is adventurous and likes to explore. In battle he is very calm and cool. He is always mad at his brother. People tend to hate him a lot

Ship: Morning Dawn

Jolly Roger: A skull with flaming swords for crossbones

Name: Genshuku Genshuku No Mi (Gravity Gravity Fruit)

Type: Logia

Abilities: The gravity fruit is one of a few Logia type fruits that allows manipulation, but not transformation. Users of the gravity fruit gain the ability to manipulate gravity through concentration. They are free to manipulate gravity in any way that they choose within the following constraints. The users hands must remain empty. The target can not be any larger than a small ship. The change in gravity can be from -10G to +15G (depends on how strong you are.)

Techniques:+10G punch:hits the target with a large amount of gravity smashing them hard in to the ground and paralyzes them.
-10G wall walk:you basically walk on walls
+10G Shield:Makes a force field that makes anything hit it fall to the ground
Cannon Ball Punch:Punches with Bleedouts so hard feels like a cannon ball
+15G Canon Ball Meteor: A direct blow to the face sending them flying like a meteor with the weight of 15G's
Flying Thunder: A flip with a kick
Canon Uppercut:A canon ball punch that is an uppercut


Weapons:Bleedout fingerless gloves with spikes on the knuckles

Goal: Help his brother be pirate king and bring down the navy


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PostSubject: Re: Keiser W. Rotiro   Keiser W. Rotiro Icon_minitimeSun May 01, 2011 12:26 pm

that is a picture of sasuke from a fan art, therefore it is a picture of a charater from another anime/video game and cannot be used as an apperance

your fruit was rejected thus a character with that fruit cannot be approved

you can revize the character (and go in to much more detail) or move on
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PostSubject: Re: Keiser W. Rotiro   Keiser W. Rotiro Icon_minitimeSun May 01, 2011 1:06 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Keiser W. Rotiro   Keiser W. Rotiro Icon_minitimeSun May 01, 2011 1:15 pm

Your personality is too short, i need a big paragraph, and so is your history your df.... is ok, but you pick physical strength or the df, not both.increase on your history as well. and the mind ripper thing makes little sense....
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PostSubject: Re: Keiser W. Rotiro   Keiser W. Rotiro Icon_minitimeSun May 01, 2011 1:22 pm

srry re-updated
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PostSubject: Re: Keiser W. Rotiro   Keiser W. Rotiro Icon_minitimeSun May 01, 2011 1:26 pm

now your history needs to be longer a bit, then i can approve you.
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PostSubject: Re: Keiser W. Rotiro   Keiser W. Rotiro Icon_minitimeSun May 01, 2011 1:29 pm

done and ready
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PostSubject: Re: Keiser W. Rotiro   Keiser W. Rotiro Icon_minitimeSun May 01, 2011 1:31 pm

hmmmm..... fine ,ill let this history slip as being barely passable, but remember for future notice, history is meant to be longer a bit, for now however....

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