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PostSubject: Luna Stargazer "Blood Angel"   Luna Stargazer "Blood Angel" Icon_minitimeWed Sep 14, 2011 2:05 pm

Name: Luna Stargazer “Blood Angel”

Age: 22

1st Bounty: 22,000,000 Belli

Species: Human

Occupation: Painter, Swordsman, Gunslinger

Allegiance: Pirate

Home Village/Ocean: Alabasta

Appearance: Luna has long curly pink hair which ends just below her shoulders; she has a smile to melt the hearts of men and Smokey looking blue eyes. Luna wears a maroon coloured dress with pink frills and similar coloured gloves which reach up to her elbows with a maroon coloured top hat whish has stitches holding it together going up the front and a red ribbon trailing round it she also has maroon ballet shoes with pink ribbon trailing around those too. She is slightly tanned, 5ft 7 in height and weighs 48 kg. Luna is an extremely beautiful woman even when she is psycho despite the fact that her outfit and face will be covered in blood. Luna has a shotgun strapped to her back by a brown leather sling and her katana hanging from her waist. Except when she’s aboard a ship she removes them.


History: Luna was a normal child growing up in Alabasta playing with her friends and learning to cook with her mother. As she grew older and older taking more of an interest in more mature things such as boys she was still a normal teenage girl dealing with lives normal problems. Her father introduced her to one his work friend’s sons Hyren and they hit it off instantly Luna and Hyren enjoyed each other’s company and their friendship grew quickly to the point where they never wanted to leave the other’s side. Hyren proposed they become boyfriend and girlfriend and she gleefully accepted his proposal. By the age of 17 Luna and Hyren’s relationship had only gotten better and bloomed into something beautiful. They both agreed to get married someday and have a family. Luna discovered that Hyren had joined Alabasta’s royal army, worried for his safety she joined to keep an eye on him and to hopefully keep him safe. With both Hyren and Luna members of Alabasta’s royal army they were ordered out to the deserts of Alabasta to fight against the sand pirates. Three sand pirate ships were all headed towards them as Luna and Hyren approached the highest point with their squad they could easily see when the best point to attack would be. As the sand pirates stopped for the night, the royal army of Alabasta were ready to attack and all crept down towards the pirate ships armed with a rifle and katana. A few of the soliders planted some bombs on the hull of the ships as some other climbed onto the main deck. Luna and Hydren went their separate ways. Hyren went in through the hull and Luna went up top. As the bombs went off the attack had begun Luna found herself steadying herself as the ground beneath her feet shook. Luna found herself being surrounded by pirates along with the other 11 soldiers who accompanied her. With her sword at the ready she took on 3 pirates without hesitation and slit one of their throats managed to stab another one through the eye and kick one over the edge of the ship. Some people get traumatized when killing but Luna was absolutely fine with it as she used all the skills she’d learnt and trained with to become one of the strongest swordswomen she slashed and hacked her way through 27 pirates before reaching for her rifle and getting 3 head shots and shooting another 2 in the kneecaps then mercilessly killing them from point black. Luna slowly began to realise she probably shouldn’t be ok with this as it was gory and murderous. As Luna charged to take another life she froze. Stopped in step and began to feel dizzy. It seemed that all the blood and death had affected her later. Luna’s body felt heavy and the pirate she was about to kill withdrew his pistol and aimed it at her head grinning. Unable to do anything Luna could feel her time slipping away and a tear slid down her cheek. The pirate’s grin turned from a grin to a blood curdling scream as his body sliced in two and blood sprayed over luna’s face. Behind the pirate was Hyren smiling with a blood drenched sword. Hyren walked over to her and rubbed the blood off on his shirt. Hyren asked her if she was ok and Luna replied with a nod and used her sword to only defend instead of kill as she didn’t know how to handle the murder anymore. Her brain felt sick and dizzy, it was hard for her stand still and protect herself, Hyren kept having to defend her with his own sword. Once all the pirates were killed Luna sat down cradled her head and began to cry. When Hyren asked what was wrong she told him that she felt dizzy and didn’t know how to handle the blood and death. She explained how it made her feel sick. Hyren led Luna up to the highest point to get some fresh air away from the corpses. Hyren left her to go back to the others and help with the clear out. Luna heard a few gunshots thinking it was just the remaining few pirates, when she turned around she discovered it was something much, much worse. Luna saw Hyren and a few other soldiers trying to defend themselves against a devil fruit user. Luna frozen with fear saw the two soldiers mutilated, and saw Hyren’s eye bleed down his face, Hyren fought as hard as he could. Hyren ended up getting his right hand cut off then getting his jugular vein cut. As Hyren’s corpse fell to the floor lifeless with blood spilling out Luna saw the devil fruit user begin to lick the blood up. Luna had tears streaming down her face which let the devil fruit user know she was there. Luna was attacked and punched through the floor into the crewmembers room. When she re-entered the main deck once again via the ladder. The devil fruit user had turned into his half bat half human hybrid. Luna’s tears had gone and she’d become so traumatized from what she’d seen she was no longer the same person. Luna dropped her rifle and picked up a simple shotgun. Armed with a shotgun and a katana one in each hand she charged at the devil fruit user and decapitated him. His brains we’re blown out all over the captain’s desk and his body as missing a large chunk as his intestines, were spread all over the room, his blood led to the helm where Luna was found covered in blood from head to toe sitting in between two wings made of blood crying her eyes out by a few travellers passing by. Luna was helped back home and given therapy to help with her trauma. The therapy helped her deal with the death and control herself when she went psycho. But she still had the horrid killer inside of her and was afraid of it escaping again. Luna was exiled from Alabasta for the murder of the rest of the royal army who were out on the operation as she was unable to control herself and saw anyone in the area as a threat. Luna knew she needed to leave and said her goodbyes then hopped on a small rowing boat and rowed away.


Personality: Luna is slightly traumatised from her childhood which can cause her to go on dangerous killing sprees and paint, dance and draw in blood. But otherwise she is an extremely nice very lethargic. She enjoys watching the waves from aboard the ship and listening in on peoples conversations as she finds it relaxing and calming. Luna hates it when someone brings up her being a psychopath as it makes her depressed about being such an amazing killer as she only wants help and love, she is untrustworthy of people who like her and usually can tell when someone wants to use her.

Ship: N/A

Ship Flag: N/A

Devil Fruit: N/A
type: N/A
effect: N/A

Special Abilities:

Remorseless killing-only when in psycho mode can Luna kill anyone without remorse as it’s linked to her anger.

Amazing sword skills-From training so hard Luna managed to become an extremely skilled swords woman.

Above average strength and speed-Only when in psycho mode can she use such extreme strength and speed as it’s linked to her anger.

Heartbeat-When in psycho mode her heart is beating 100 times faster than the average heart making it so she can attack quicker than usual

Learned Techniques

Slash attack-This attack uses the air itself to slash the target from a distance. To initiate it, Luna first holds her sword horizontally above the shoulder of her sword arm, and then performs a circular swing that launches the air compressed projectile spiraling towards the target. (Able to use in and out of psycho mode)

Batter shot-Luna uses the shotgun to beat enemies out of her way then to fire a few shots. (Able to use in and out of psycho)

Katana shotgun-Luna stabs her enemy then fires the shotgun into her enemy and jumps back into another enemy with her sword facing backwards. (able to use in and out of psycho mode)

Boat slash-Luna has the ability to slash through a small boat. (Able to use in and out of psycho mode but power is weaker.)

Jugular train-Luna slashes towards the jugular area on a person and the attack travels past every enemy in that direction and cuts their Jugular vein which causes a fatal wound. (Able to use in and out of psycho mode.)

Hat strangle-Luna uses the red ribbon around her hat to strangle her enemies (able to use in and out of psycho mode.)

Weapons/Items: Shotgun and a katana.

Character flaws-

In psycho mode her becomes weaker afterwards and she will have to rest for a while afterwards depending on how intense the fight she has been in depends on how long she must rest for.

The longer she is in psycho mode the harder it is to control herself and the more bloodthirsty she becomes also it makes her lose sight of whose her friends and whose her enemies.

Goals: Find someone she cares about enough that she can stop her psychopathic problem.


Last edited by Wolfsbane on Thu Sep 15, 2011 1:58 am; edited 3 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Luna Stargazer "Blood Angel"   Luna Stargazer "Blood Angel" Icon_minitimeThu Sep 15, 2011 1:19 am

Although I realize there aren't that many female swordsmen to begin with, you should try work up to being one of the "best" instead of simply starting out there. Also keep in mind that she's already skilled with both swords and guns, so starting out with that along with superhuman strength and speed seems a bit much to me. A bit above average should fine, however.

Besides that, keep the ability boosts she gets in "psycho" mode to a minimum. If you're looking for something insanely strong, there'll need to be some sort of side effect or two to balance it out.

Your "Blocking Slice" attack doesn't make a whole lot of sense to me, particularly if Luna's using a regular sword. Could you either explain how she's able to splice through metal like that, or remove that technique? The opponent would have to be pushing as hard as Luna is to keep the blade in one place, or else the sword would simply be shoved back.

Kudos for attempting to make a female that's actually a respectable fighter, though.
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PostSubject: Re: Luna Stargazer "Blood Angel"   Luna Stargazer "Blood Angel" Icon_minitimeThu Sep 15, 2011 1:58 am

Ok thanks I've edited her
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PostSubject: Re: Luna Stargazer "Blood Angel"   Luna Stargazer "Blood Angel" Icon_minitimeThu Sep 15, 2011 6:36 am

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