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Unholy

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Name:Unholy "The Darkener"

Age:240(giant's live 3 times as long as humans)

Bounty: 100,000,000 Beli

Species: Giant

Occupation: Navigator

Allegiance: Pirate (Unholy Pirates)
Home Village/Ocean: Grandline
Appearance: A Giant With Pale skin and shadowy Dark Green eyes,scar's all over his body,has a wicked smile on all the time,and a deep scar across the right side of his face drown to his chest. Black Greyish hair down to his neck,all his clothes are dark black, and he has a very deep voice that will make you tremble with fear. And is 20ft tall and 400 pounds

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History: A notorious assassin on the grandline. He's Murdered pirate and marine alike along with who ever has a price on there head.completely destroyed marine bases and villages just to satisfy his deep thirst for killing. Along time ago he was a member of a group of assassin's but Unholy grew tiered of the rules and serving the organization so he killed all with easily. The leader of the assassins fought fiercely with Unholy Leaving a deep cut on the right side of his face down to his chest before dieing he said " You Bastard How dare you betray us!? And for what tell me now so i can die for what ever damn reason you have!." Unholy Turned to him and said. "I Must be The darkest thing to cross these sea's in order for my dream of ruling this world and completely destroying the marines and all pirates so no man will stand up to my new world. Wont the world be a better place when im the last monster alive?!!! mohahahahahahahahhaah" Unholy grabbed the man's neck and squeezed until his head pooped off like a cork on a bottle. He noticed a key on his belt. unholy took it and searched the room until he found a strange box. opening it he found a devil fruit upon eating the Sabi Sabi no Mi he became a rust man. With his Evil Grin Unholy felt his power's. Now with this I will Kill all those who threaten this world making me the rightful Emperor to rule this world
(He Was Also One The The devil Fruit User's Who destroyed Dakumaru's ( https://theonepiecerp.rpg-board.net/character-creation-f2/dakumaru-t1527.htm ) Hometown in north blue, Unholy found out the pirates were having fun with out him so he joined in the fun, Not being able to kill the yellowed eye pirate made him furious "well I guess you'll find my blade in your back one of these days and with his evil smile he left)
Unholy then Attacked Island after island gathering crew members in the process. (Old Crew https://theonepiecerp.rpg-board.net/t1584-black-berri-pirates?highlight=black )Mr blue the blue gorilla joined Unholy because of his promise to help save his kind. But grew cold towards unholy. Frosty the bunny girl joined with her 2 bunny brothers she always called Unholy big bro Unholy. then Greg and fred the Merman brothers, Nightwing the skypiea sniper who looked up to Unholy like a father.Joe joined later to work on the ship, Then Prince Anubis joined Unholy's second in command, Zalton Mauraski,Satoshi Miroku,then Saint Joseph the crazy priest joined and Vlad the murding syco path. They All Destroyed the Kingdom of salamthia together Unholy also crippled Dart D Black here. After Looseing Frosty,Nightwing frozen to death breaking Unholys heart,Joe and fred&greg in the war. then mr blue betrayed them and died.After loosing most of his friends Unholy Became depressed. After Saint Joseph Joined he challenged Unholy and knocked him off Skypiea
Before falling into the ocean Unholy Encased himself in a mass amount of rust.
Preserving his body. Later Treasure hunters discovered his body thinking it was a work of art sold him on the black market. Eventually a scientist bought Unholy and chipped though the rust to discover most of his body still intact. The rust also preserved his brain. But caused major brain damage. Replacing his destroyed body parts for cyborg parts. The scientists hoped to learn more about him for the sake of science. But Unfortanatly for them unholy is the Ultimate Monster. Wakeing Up on a Slab with few memories The cyborg giant is not happy... not happy one bit. Moahahahahah. Later in Atlantis Unholy Gained controll over his body during a fight.. then running into Derge and Ignis they formed a deadly plan...As Ignis touched Unholy it restored his flesh and he became a full blooded Giant again. Greatful Unholy took it upon himself to make Ignis his life long nakama which is saying alote for the Darkener he rarely makes statements like that.Unholy then joined the war in Salmanthia and saved Veronica and her friends. They returned with Unholy back to Atlantis to betraw derge to save Unholys oldest Nakama Anubis. After Atlantis Unholy Married Veronica and went on a honey moon to Goldburg. After taking over Goldburgs Main Casinos Unholy established an ulimited sorce of belli for his new kindom Salmanthia. Now controlling 2 Islands Unholy Kingdom Adventures into Fairy Vearth



Personality:Evil,merciless,Beli talks it can even save your life for the right price,takes pleasure is seeing humans rip to shreds. an overall bad guy who is greedy =P , He basically insane but in an evil way. Like He will do crazy Evil things no matter how reckless or complicated. but he is always 5 steps ahead.

Ship:Divinity

Ship Flag:A Burning Skeletal Hand

Devil Fruit: Sabi Sabi no Mi(Rust Rust)
type: Paramecia
effect: Rust's anything that touches me or i touch metal and even flesh
http://onepiece.wikia.com/wiki/Sabi_Sabi_no_Mi

Special Abilities: powers excluding the devil fruit not techniques for example a sword style

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):
1)Shadow Soru, Lightning speed movement that can blend in with shadow's (learned this from Being a assassin)
2)Rusty Tekkai, hardens the users' muscles to the level of iron,With a coat of rust that will rust anything that attacks me
3)Demon Curse,Single Sword technique, Phase 1 Slashed his Sword to make a Star shape cut victim's body,Phase 2 then attempting to cut off the points of the star which would be in the following sequence right arm, right leg,left leg,left arm, Phase 3 attempt slicing the head in half, and stabbing the Victim in the heart. ( now i don't do all these attacks at once mind you, each phase is a single move. This Attack In a killing move he loves to see people suffer) And if the victim happens to not loose any limbs or his life he will find out that the rust from my sword (due to my devil fruit ability) will have entered His blood stream Causing the finally Effect Phase 4 Lockjaw Which stiffens the victims body (common guys u know what lockjaw is right? https://health.google.com/health/ref/Tetanus ) Unholy Can remove the effect and control it.
4)Rusty Air Slicer: Slashing his gaint rusty sword at extreme strength Sends one Gaint AIr Blade with rust infused within . Effect is basically the same as being cut my Unholys rusty swords only this is long ranged.
5)Rust Monster. Sacrifices the body to cover the user in a flesh eating rust.it only impact the area it touches.
6)Cross Cleave: Does a powerful X motion with his Giant Katana's
7)Assassin Art: Shadow Dance! Useing Shadow soru to speed from shadow to shadow to avoid detection.
8)Assassin Art:Hidden Blades! If successfully hidden from an opponent.User attacks from the shadow with Five rapid slashes without making any noise what so ever.
9)Assassin Art:Shadow Master Style! Slashes at an enemy's vital organs. While attacking from a different angle with each individual sword attack.
10)Windmill counter! Counter's any physical attack and useing the momentum into my next attack doubling my damage or into another Windmill Counter
11)Rusty Barrage: Throws 100 rust covered Normal sized knives at his opponent.
12) Assassin Art:Dark Trap! Only before battle sets up deep pit thats camouflaged. Layering the bottom of the pit with rust blades. While setting up a huge log on both sides to swing down to knock them into the pit. Once in the pit it triggers a huge rock to fall on top of them.
13)Rusty Decoy: When useing shadow soru and is coated in rust. Unholy leaves behind a rust image of himself. this rust is harmless just fools enemys into thinking hes still standing there
14)Smoke Screen! Throws 10 well placed smoke bombs to cover the area in smoke preventing opponents from seeing.
15)Shadow Slime the body stretches and moves in ways slime or sludge would move in order to avoid attacks
16)Shadow Samurai.A dual sword drawing technique so powerful that it can split large obstacles in half.,Drawing two swords and sheaths them quickly.
17)Shadow Step. allows the users to actually jump off the air itself
18)Rusty Shadow Leg' Sends a compressed Air wave Infused with rust from users leg.
19)Shadow King Gun! user places one or both his fists or Swords right in front of the target and launches a devastating shock wave
20)Assassine Art: 4 Sword Style:Scars.Attacks with 2 katanas & two foot blades in an instant slash & stab.
21)Assassine Art: 6 Sword Style:Danceing Katana!"Throws 4 katana at opponet barley missing them then useing shadow Soru to Charge with two katanas while slashing pulls all four wires and slashes at Six differant angles.
22)Assassine Art: 8 Sword Style:Shadow Kings Dance!.Useing Shadow Soru user Slashes with all four Wired Katanas. While Kicking with His Foot blades.Leaving his Two Katana behind with each attack he does this two times. Then Chargeing the Enemy a final time uses Shadow King Gun with both his Katanas while pulling of the four wires to have a six sided attack. and still kicking with his Foot blades.
23)Red Rust: Sacrificing His Body in Rust monster Form Unholy's Rust Becomes even more powerful rusting away solid objects even faster. But the increase of rust speed eats away at his flesh. Without healing or resting Unholy can Only use Red rust for Five Posts.
24)Emperor's Fury. User goes Berserk Gaining stronger and faster attacks but blindly attacking in rage
25)Divine Art:The Darkener: Unholy useing Shadow Soru fast speeds in attempt to assassinate everyone in a
1 mile radias from him.(Can only be used in Berserk state)

Weapons/Items:2 Giant Katana's,Assasin Blades & Foot Wear, Bag Of Knives,Smoke bombs,Rust bombs

Goals:To get enough berri that I can enjoy myself to the fullest and to take over the world & to kill anyone when ever he feels like it even though it does that already=)


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PostSubject: Re: Rip Unholys Body with Holys Mind perised    Rip Unholys Body with Holys Mind perised  Icon_minitimeFri Jan 28, 2011 6:24 am

Please explain more about the damage potential of the mouth laser.
Rusty Tekkai- Rust is an iron oxide; it is a corroded material, making it a bit weaker than unblemished wrought iron, not equal.
Rust ball should be limited to affecting the precise point of impact, not turning the entire person to rust.
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PostSubject: Re: Rip Unholys Body with Holys Mind perised    Rip Unholys Body with Holys Mind perised  Icon_minitimeFri Jan 28, 2011 6:34 am

Mouth lazer is basically just any beam a cyborg would have the dark part just makes it difficult to see in dark area's

And the rusty tekkai is basically tekkai with a slight rusty outer layer. the rust doesnt make the tekkai stronger its more of a combo defence.

Well i didnt imply that the rust ball would automatically turn people into rust. thats just the maximum ability of it. if you take a direct hit from it and be lazy and just sit there it will eat away at your body slowly nothing about it is instant. Cuz rust after all is an overtime effect.
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PostSubject: Re: Rip Unholys Body with Holys Mind perised    Rip Unholys Body with Holys Mind perised  Icon_minitimeFri Jan 28, 2011 6:40 am

Rust is not a fungus that spreads; it needs a catalyst, which is, in this case, direct contact with the ball. The ball needs a precise size and impact radius so the amount of affected areas can be derived, in the event of a direct hit.
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PostSubject: Re: Rip Unholys Body with Holys Mind perised    Rip Unholys Body with Holys Mind perised  Icon_minitimeFri Jan 28, 2011 6:42 am

OK how about the size of my fist..? It doesnt explode or anything its just a fist size ball of rust he throws at people if it misses it doesnt do anything
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PostSubject: Re: Rip Unholys Body with Holys Mind perised    Rip Unholys Body with Holys Mind perised  Icon_minitimeFri Jan 28, 2011 6:48 am

i cant just forget the ball of rust if its too much?
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Fist size is perfect, just have it only impact the area it touches.

I'm really more concerned with the mouth laser. A LASER, or Light Amplification by Stimulated Emission of Radiation, by its nature cannot be dark. Ever. It is made of light. This is also a highly damaging weapon concept from the OP uni, used by Pacifista; it seems unfair for you to have a DF AND one of the more powerful weapon concepts in the series.
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PostSubject: Re: Rip Unholys Body with Holys Mind perised    Rip Unholys Body with Holys Mind perised  Icon_minitimeFri Jan 28, 2011 3:00 pm

Ok ill just call it a Cool lazer beam. its not intended to be powerful. If i said a moderate blast would that be ok?
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I think that since your fruit has the ability to rust non-iron things like organic material, such as human tissue, having a laser in addition to that ability is over the top. Being part cyborg with bizarre projectile additions is fine but keep it reasonable. A mouth laser is one of those high powered, premium pacifista developments that the world of this site is supposed to predate by quite a bit. You have a devil fruit; use it.
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KK ive edited it removed the lazer and fixed other complants.
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Added a few new ability's and raised bounty 50,000,000 belli
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Needs reapproval for the Four additional katanas ive added and his foot blades. Along with a couple more technics Ive added.

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Added a few more technics Along with a 50,000,000 bounty increase
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