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Lamont

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PostSubject: Cream Servit "Bagel Girl"   Cream Servit "Bagel Girl" Icon_minitimeTue Jul 26, 2011 12:53 pm

Name: Cream Servit

Age: 14

Bounty: N/A

Species: Human

Occupation: Cook; Navigator

Allegiance: Pirate

Home Village/Ocean: Pastry Village, Tasty Island, East Blue

Appearance:

Cream is 5 feet and 5 inches tall. Her hair is black and has strands of dyed blue hair. Part of her hair covers both of her eyes. The color of her eyes is grey. Cream wears basic and simple clothing. She wears a plain white shirt, pleated black skirt, black stockings, and black combat boots. On her left arm she has a black armlet with white frills. She wears a loose red belt with a small dagger hanging from it. She carries around a white backpack that holds her weapons inside. Cream is always shy, but can be just as fierce as anyone else. She rarely shows signs of a smile, keeping a more serious expression on her face.

History:

Cream was born to a famous cook and a mapmaker. Cream was a bright girl who loved being around her father and his work. Sadly, her mother was struck by illness and died when she was five years old, so Amanda had only her father as an inspiration. She loved to go with her father on expeditions, and would go out to sea with him to see new land for him to map. She was well versed in the making of maps and the ways the winds and nature affected a ship. Her father trained her in everything he knew, and she became quite adept at it. However, she loved cooking even more. Whenever she had the spare time, she would always be found cooking, usually bagels.

When she was six, Cream’s father was hired by a passing pirate crew to join them on their expedition to the Grand Line in order to navigate it’s infamous waters. He readily agreed, and Cream saw him off at the ship with a tearful goodbye. During his time away, she continued to build her knowledge, hoping to one day catch up to him and maybe meet him on the Grand Line.

She had plenty of time now that her father left for the Grand Line. Sometimes she would cook, but she would sometimes practice fighting. Her grandfather was the owner of a dojo. Her grandfather taught her how to fight with swords and how to fight with her fists. She was strong, but was no match for her grandfather. She decided that she would fight like a ninja and stated using ninja stars.

Tasty Island was always full of visitors. People went there to eat, to cook, or just to see the sights. Pastry Village was usually a place where only pastries were made, but Cream had a restaurant there. Cream decided to honor her mother by making a restaurant with her uncle and aunt. Her uncle was the owner of the restaurant. Her aunt was the waiter and Cream was the cook. She was only ten, but she was the best chef on the island. She would cook day in and day out for people.

When Cream was 14 she learned that the same ship that had recruited her father all those years ago would be returning to Tasty Island. Hoping to see her father once again, she rushed to port. The man that descended from that ship however was nothing like the man she once knew. This was a broken man. He looked old. Too old. She took the mapmaker home, and listened to his stories. The Grand Line had done quite the number on the crew, and they ran. He felt weak. He begged her never to do the same and to never to give up her dreams. Cream promised her father that simple request.

A week later, her father passed away. She set sail to complete her father's dream. She followed the details in his Loguebook and entered the Grand Line. She became a pirate alone and attacked many Marines.

Personality: Cream is a very calm girl. She gets along with most other people comfortably, but is very shy. Although she may look harmless, at times she can be very dangerous and a scary opponent. She isn't angered easily. However, once she becomes seriously angry or if someone threatens her family, she turns into a being of malice and fury that is capable of demoralizing the strongest opponent. Cream’s personality would be best described as caring. She cares for everyone she knows.

Ship: N/A

Jolly Roger: N/A

Devil Fruit: N/A
Type- N/A
Effect- N/A

Special Abilities:

• Cooking
• Navigation

Learned Techniques:

• Dance of a Thousand Bagels
- Cream throws out a thousand tiny bagels at the opponent. Star points come out of the bagel and slash the opponents body.
• Bagel Star
- Cream throws a bagel that has star points coming out of the bagel at the opponent.
• Cannon Fire: Bagel Bombs
- Cream uses her bazooka cannon to fire explosive bagels.

Sword Techniques:

• Eye of the Storm
- Wind slashes are sent out from the sword in a straight line.

Weapons/Items:

• Bagel Stars
• Tiny Bagel Stars
• Bagel Bomb Bazooka
• Bagel Bombs
• Kukri

Goal(s): To complete her father's dream of sailing the Grand Line.


Last edited by Lamont on Tue Jul 26, 2011 5:16 pm; edited 2 times in total
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GoreFish

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PostSubject: Re: Cream Servit "Bagel Girl"   Cream Servit "Bagel Girl" Icon_minitimeTue Jul 26, 2011 3:47 pm

Hm... Personality way too short. The history is a bit mixed up, but basically okay, except for the part of how she got her bounty, which is pretty cheap. As for occupations, you do not have to put pirate or fighter there. Also, you never explained how exactly she became a fighter, or how exactly a ten year old would ever come into possession of a restaurant.
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Lamont

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PostSubject: Re: Cream Servit "Bagel Girl"   Cream Servit "Bagel Girl" Icon_minitimeTue Jul 26, 2011 5:17 pm

Ok I fixed it
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