Messiah Prophecies {My Original Manga}

Posts : 18 Join date : 2010-10-08 Age : 33

Title(s): Messiah Prophecies, False Messiah, Messiah Chronicles
Artist: TRAPNEST (my real name here XD)
About:
In a world that ended, humanity remains, and the reason for this, is the so called messiah. Hundreds of centuries had past since the messiah was last seen, leaving the land in peace, the 7 kingdoms waged war upon them selves, Leonart, Lubelia, Carmel, Aida, Bevel, Lunalil and Baravia.

Amongst the 7, one prospered with the lost of others, the kingdom of Carmel.

Prophecy foretold the end of the world, will start within the middle, and within the middle found is the core where the Empire Rose in power. The Empire holds the world within there hands, and with fear of the prophecy, the world feared of the Empire.

And so a world of Chaos was born, there was no longer a battle for land, no longer the thirst for power, Carmel, took it all, the empire owns everything.
Story:

Though in general, the story is about a never ending battle for freedom against the empire and the alliance between all kingdoms, it's mostly about a boy named Fix.

He is a 15 year old boy branded as a cursed child for having white hair and crimson red eyes when he goes under the moonlight. Despite being seen as a monster, he never grew bitter of the world, he always did his best be recognized by everyone, be recognized as someone of the like, be recognized as a human.

But despite all his efforts, the only person who's shown affection towards him was his deceased Master Jack Nicholas, King of bevel, given the brand of pirate king for starting an all out rebellion against the Empire.

The beginning of the manga is the death of Jack Nicholas where fix is shown crying over a grave he himself made. It was where he first met Jack 8 years earlier.

Meeting Jack changed his life forever, and from him, he received the happy jack pin which changes his hair color whenever he wears it, hence receiving acceptance from everyone else in the world.

Random comments from me:
I didnt originally plan the whole story for a manga, it started out as an obsession with RPG-games like final fantasy and the likes. I was so absorbed that i wanted to literally make one, and together with it a whole new world.

That's when i came up with False messiah as an RPG forum. My friend told me that it would make a really good manga plot, i went like "meh, i cant draw the same characters twice, plus i hate details."

But then again, maybe i can try. so i tried.

False messiah earlier manga attempt (RAW)
http://darklunah26.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2bjx78
http://darklunah26.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2b5vhh (semi-cleaned)

I guess you can tell i have no where to go from there. Not only can i not draw in details, i cant draw panels and proportions properly as well.

So i gave up with the manga idea and went with the RP for the longest time.

But i guess i didnt really give up, i tried again, this time starting from the very beginning of the story. (Unlike when on my first attempt, i skipped one to many chapters)

So enough about that, here are some character sketches*cheers*

Ringo (Female protagonist)
http://darklunah26.deviantart.com/art/Ringo-False-Messiah-139685065

Rolo Star (Male antagonist)
http://darklunah26.deviantart.com/art/Rolo-Star-140135795

Fix Elliot (Teen/ Main Character!) (Ooh! an the right eye was not left out, i just wanted to make his eye appear white and stuff, but i guess its not much of a help)
http://darklunah26.deviantart.com/art/Fix-146235047

Spinny Davison AKA Sharkspin (Sky king, Jack's Pupil)
https://2img.net/h/i58.photobucket.com/albums/g275/GothikaH26/sharkspin.png

Chapter 1 - Path of the cursed (8 pages)

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ooooh very impressive, im curious to see the different characters you will input

Posts : 211 Join date : 2010-08-31 Age : 30

Awesome, I have so many ideas about writting manga but I can't draw Q.Q

yeah same with me too, i cant draw, but i have a fantastic ideas

Nice!
I wish I could draw like that ;P

Posts : 18 Join date : 2010-10-08 Age : 33

Thanks for the positive feedback guys, took me a while to scan those stuff and edit them (adding text and editing/cleaning it)

so thank you, i'll add updates when i get the next 10 pages done (making an 18 page first chapter)