Atem D. Mutou

ok, here the problems I have with your techniques (the numbers corispond with the technique's number on your sheet)

1- I dont understand it at all please explain it more
2- unrealistic, unreasnable and unexplained
6- (same as #2)
8- explain more (how can it cut threw most things? what cant it cut threw?)
9- (same as #8 )
10- (same as #2 but much more so)

shorted life span is not a sufficient drawback becouse it has no effect in battle so useless in this rp

i think light should be super effective
can his projectiles be blocked?

I asked that question in my list, but I agree with you about light (dont forget abou my list)

yea ok plus i think his stamina should be vary low

1)I explained it

2)removed it

6)removed it

8)Explained

9)Same as 8, just sword version

10)Weakened it down even more, it now just pushes back real opponents(non npcs) into some corner and tries to crush them. This can be blocked or deflected/repelled by a Strong enough player.

Light is now super-effective
Stamina is now very low
His projectiles can be blocked by a strong enough opponent.

alright! if you think about it he wont have to move that much anyway, (his stamina is that of a normal human, which is much less than that of a gaiant)

APPROVED!!!