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Bloodwake189

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PostSubject: Rorrun Malek Drake (Finished)   Rorrun Malek Drake (Finished) Icon_minitimeSun May 11, 2014 4:44 pm

-Simple Information-
Name: Rorrun Malek Drake
Also known as: 'Malicious'
Age: 24
Species: Human
Gender: Male

Loyalty: Pirate
Affiliation: Pirates
Occupation: Musician/Fighter/Captain
Bounty: 200,000
Crimes
13 counts if theft=40,000
Several marines dead by his hand=120,000
Destruction of private property= 40,000

Specialty: Single sword style, playing his violin
Goals: Learn an enormous variety of songs for his violin, become a Schichibukai and terrorize the world government.
Funds: 0

50,000,000-Donations from vahla
-50,000,000-Trade for AP
=0

Level: 0
Posts till next level: 0/15

-Appearance information-
Physical appearance:

Body: Rorrun has a good build and a decent amount of dexterity, his standard 6’3 stature suits his 169lbs. A light tan spreads across his well toned person which has been in great shape since his 14th birthday when he began training, overall he’s in great health and strong to boot. A hard 6 pack sits tight on his abdomen. Several veins show down his arms when he flexes but his muscle isn’t so enormous it bulges immensely.

Face: Rorrun has a straight profile jaw line with a stubble covering it. A blonde tuft sits on his chin with a small black streak down the center; normal sized lips accompany his features. His blue eyes are so dark one could say they look cold like ice. Usually a smile will be plastered on Rorrun’s face and a cigar will be hanging out. Although when in a life threatening situation or in one that needs a serious choice he tends to make the smile leave.

Hair: Rorrun has short hair styled into a makeshift Mohawk on his head, short cut on the sides getting longer as it gets to the Mohawk. His hair is a light blonde with a small black patch at the front of the Mohawk. This dangerous yet stunning look usually lures in ladies and oh boy does Rorrun enjoy that. On his chin sets a similarly styled patch of blonde chin hair with a black stripe down the center.

Non visual information: Rorrun has a cocky voice with some seriousness mixed in. It isn’t very deep yet isn’t high pitched either. Being in his prime his senses are in tip top shape.
Extra features: A grey tribal tattoo curls around his left shoulder down his arm and around his neck halfway onto his peck. Another Sits on his abdomen that’s styled to his crews emblem.

Clothing: Rorrun wears a light grey tank top with a white border made of cotton. Around his waist sits a white leather belt with a silver buckle and a skull engraved in it, it has some slight slack. A second hangs on his right side that’s black, this one holds his swords.  Around his neck sits a small metal pendant with his parents name engraved on either side. His right hand has a black fingerless glove and his left has bandages wrapped around up to his elbow. Around his hips down to his mid-shin is a pair of white pants tucked into combat boots. Each of his knees has a grey knee guard made of metal. The brown/black boots have metal on the front with small spikes for kicking. Under all that he usually wears a pair of white/blue boxers made of cotton.

-Personality information-

Personality Overview: Rorrun has been a mix of an optimist and a realist since birth. Sometimes looking on the bright side of things and sometimes taking a more serious outlook. Rorrun will always help those in need, if it means taking out a giant group of marines or pirates then so be it. He won’t take from those who are poor, won’t kill civilians; anyone innocent is spared but more lucrative places for plunder he may choose to run through. Of course he wouldn’t do it without a top class crew, he isn’t stupid. Although he’s more combat oriented he still has a somewhat tactical overview. However he isn’t the best at that.

Rorrun absolutely hates sniviling and, I think I'm better than you, people. He would een go out of his way to punch a tenryuubito if he felt they were being so terribly stupid. Among other things he respects those that fight with honor, whether their an enemy or not. Ya quite the opposite for those who would seek revenge after the match is done.

Likes, Dislikes, Hopes and Fears: (one paragraph minimum)
Lets start with likes. Rorrun is fond of nakama, family and friends. He would lay down his own life to help them when their in a spot. People standing up for themselfs makes him want to join in and help. He loves to eat meat, cheese, and mangos. he also likes practicing with his swords or in hand to hand or playing his instrument.

He dislikes arrogant, stuck up people and would go so far as to punch a tenryuubito because he makes him so sick to his stomach. He is allergic to a certain mushroom and thus dislikes them along with coconut . Another thing he dislikes are marines. Albeit he doesn't severely hate them he has grown a distance for them.

Rorrun one day hopes to amass vast riches to send back to his home town and to slide up to schichibukai. He wants to make his own crew but is okay with being in another for a time...a time.. All in all he doesn't have many hopes other than those. Oh and he want to find his missing father who disappeared after being impaled by a spear.

He fears dying as a nobody and loosing his friends. He also has a slight fear of spiders but its not out of control. He isn't afraid of failing but at the same time seeing his crew or friends beaten and bloodied would piss him off.
-History information-**

Birth
Rorrun was born in a large north blue town named Vahla, his parents, steady farmers provided sufficient resources for him with their meager income.  When he was born he had a scar on his nose from the birthing. He was fed very healthily and playfully learnt piracy from his father who was an ex-pirate. His mother however disapproved but loved his father. He was never abused, never went unfed and never went unloved.
Childhood
During his childhood Rorrun was someone who typically stayed to himself but when he would on occasion help people or talk with them they would become his friend rather quickly. At this point he began working on his parents farm, picking veggies, chopping wood,  and then learning. Then one day that changed. A group of pirates, The Gregor Pirates, attacked his town. The resistance was crushed and prisoners killed. Among the casualties, his mother whom the pirates had violated and then killed.Rorrun was crushed. He and his father took others into the forest on the other side of the island and they conspired. It wasent until late adolescence they would fight back against te tyrant.
Early adolescence 9-14
During his early adolescence Rorrun trained with the other resistance members, went to town to sell the family produce and again pickin it. During this time he learnt to swing a sword and shoot a gun. His father was the second in command, an elderly yet strong man named Trahain was the leader. They planned and practiced with Rorrun participating. His father forbid it but Rorrun planned on fighting with them to take the town back. Then something else terrible happened.

Late adolescence 15-18
Up to the age of 18 his job was to gater food for the resistance Then the time came for the uprising, people threw bombs, pulled guns on the pirates and suprise attacked. It was only revealed hours later that Rorruns father planned on takin on Gregor. A large and strong man without special powers. Rorrun ran after in an attempt to interrupt it. He was delayed by several of the resistance members who needed help. A large screen appeared from a den den mushi above town square where it was all visible. On it was pirate Gregor with Rorruns father in the back, impaled on a spear. That was it. He was just 18 and he was going to attack that vile pathetic man with all he had, he would crush him by himself with no help! Rorrun picked up his pace and ran into the square, as soon as he sighted Gregor he darted and speared him in the side.

"GHAH, what are you doing you brat?" Gregor smashed a fist into Rorruns back and the young boy smashed into the stone ground.

"Bastard..."Rorrun choked, getting up. He again lunged at Gregor who in turn side stepped ad ten kicked Rorrun int beside with all his might. Propelling him into a roll that stopped by way of a building. Holding his side Rorrun choked out a small cry. Tears trailing his face. Rorrun stood again.

"You bastards!" He choked out. His head had traces if blood, a lip was cracked and bleeding. Rorrun ran up and jumped, throwing a kick towards Gregors head. Gregor grabbed it and threw Rorrun into a column. Laying on his side Rorrun cursed Gregor. He looked at the man with pure hatred and disgust. Then he snapped. Getting up Rorrun stood straight, an evil and killer look in his eyes. One that said 'if you plan on killing me, I'll take you with.'

He charged again. This time he allowed Gregor to throw the first punch, when Gregor missed and staggard forward rorrun used both momentums to smash his fist into the pirates face. They stayed like that for a moment. His fist on Gregors face before Gregors hand grabbed Rorruns head, palm on face. Slowly he lifted up Rorrun and revealed his bloodied face from under Rorruns knuckles.

"Watch carefully resistance fighters. This is what happens when you try and fight Gregor-"

" NO!"

Rorrun yelled loudly

"Don't let him make you slaves! Don't let him take your freedoms away! Don't be afraid of him, he's human like all of us just fight!"

Gregor laughed and brought his hand back with Rorruns head in grasp. He brought the boys head down to the ground and knocked the win out of Rorrun with a fair amount of damage done as well. He put his boot on Rorruns head and looked at the den den mushi.

"This is what happens to bad tax payers."

He began stepping harder which earned a yell of pain from Rorrun. Whom didnt plead or beg. Then a small rock hit Gregors head. He looked around to find a small girl who had thrown it,"Shishishi."

"You think that'll stop me lit'le girl?" He laughed so hard he didn't notice several other civilians come out of teir homes with pistols and swords, some of te revolutionaries appeared and then more civilians. This time Gregor laughed meekly.

"What is this?"

The people charged at him.
Adulthood 19-
After the battle Gregor lay dead and the townspeople rejocing. The only one not taking part in the merriment was Rorrun. His fathers body had disappeared from the ground after the battle. He decided to stick with his plan to become a pirate, sailing the seas and making it to the grandline to get riches so he could give bak to the town. After staying to heal for several days he made a raft to set sail. At port he stood looking at the town for one last time. Then while preparing his raft, all of the citizens came up to the port with bags bull of...money. They each individually handed him something of value, even the kids did. Then when overlooking the large pile he began crying, thanking them for all they have done. He set off and wished them all good fortune then began his adventure to the grandline.

Relationships with other characters: Maria Drake -Mother(deceased), Melborne Drake-Father (At large)

-Stats-^

  • Strength:  20 %
  • Endurance: 20%
  • Speed: 20%
  • Agility:  10%
  • Skill:  10%
  • Tactical intelligence: 10%
  • Practical intelligence:   10%
  • Perception: 10%
  • Charisma and leadership: 10%
  • Devil fruit control: 0%

10 AP-50,000,000 beli
10%- bonus


-Equipment List-
1 Cutlases  
1 flintlock pistol.

-Abilities-

Ability Points: 40AP

20-Start
+10-Birthday
+10- Belli trade
=40AP

Passive traits: His sense of instinct, his ability to make friends naturally.

Devil Fruit: (if applicable, must include a link)

Talents: Playing his violin, basic cooking, basic survival and sword fighting.

Learned skills:
Single sword style

Techniques lists:^
(working on it now)


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Bloodwake189

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PostSubject: Re: Rorrun Malek Drake (Finished)   Rorrun Malek Drake (Finished) Icon_minitimeTue May 13, 2014 6:46 pm

Done! Well...mostly..
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PostSubject: Re: Rorrun Malek Drake (Finished)   Rorrun Malek Drake (Finished) Icon_minitimeWed May 14, 2014 12:25 am

Your personality overview needs another paragraph to meet the minimum requirments.

To be a captain and lure in the ladies with his mohawk he'll need more than 0% charisma and leadership. A crew cannot be formed until you have 20% in that stat.

The swords need to be made in the equipment section.

A sword skill would be in learned skills rather than talent.

Finally, this is purely a suggestion. We have a starter system that allows you to trade belli for stats and or ability points. It'd help make sure you don't have any stats at 0%.
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PostSubject: Re: Rorrun Malek Drake (Finished)   Rorrun Malek Drake (Finished) Icon_minitimeWed May 14, 2014 1:23 am

How would one go about trading the belli for so and or stats?

Ill fix the other stuff now as well
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PostSubject: Re: Rorrun Malek Drake (Finished)   Rorrun Malek Drake (Finished) Icon_minitimeThu May 15, 2014 6:24 pm

The 50 million belli would only get you 10 extra ap.  11 at the very most if you used the bonus on it.

*Edit* How did he get his bounty?
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PostSubject: Re: Rorrun Malek Drake (Finished)   Rorrun Malek Drake (Finished) Icon_minitimeThu May 15, 2014 6:51 pm

Fixed
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PostSubject: Re: Rorrun Malek Drake (Finished)   Rorrun Malek Drake (Finished) Icon_minitimeThu May 15, 2014 7:11 pm

God how I've been waiting to see that face lol
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