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Eijisu

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PostSubject: Kenshin Yagami    Kenshin Yagami  Icon_minitimeSun Feb 02, 2014 9:22 pm

-Simple Information-
Name: Kenshin Yagami
Also known as: the sniper
Age: 23
Species: Human
Gender: Male


Loyalty: himself
Affiliation: occasionally work with other bounty hunters but other than that hes a solo operative
Occupation: Bounty hunter
Bounty:


Specialty: guns and rifles ranged combat.
Goals: to be the best marksman/sharpshooter/gunslinger in the world
Funds: 0


Level: (all characters must start at level zero, technically there is no level cap yet)^
Posts till next level: #/# (see the thread by thread experience curve in the advanced section)*


-Appearance information-
Physical appearance:

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Body: Standing only 197 cm (6'6") and weighting 81.64 kg (160 lbs). Kenshin might not be one of the tallest or heaviest persons out there, but hes still a force to be reckoned with. His skin are very smooth  with a light natural skin tone. he have slanted shoulders not much wider than the width of his waist. He is built with thick, dense muscle that traces his bones perfect more slim and agile than a beefy mountain of muscles.


Face: a sharp and angular face, with magenta eyes shine with the intensity of the sun. Within these twin orbs, are oceanic depths of wisdom and experience,. But there is a resolve within them, a determination and warmth despite the atrocities he has seen, and likely committed in his life. Below the long ridge of his nose are thin lips that smile softly at his company. However his face are usually covered by the scarf and hat.

Hair: eck long silvery/black that he lets hang lose under his hat. he have two tufts framing his face although its hard to see due to the hat, its hard to.  the hair turning more darker grey at the tips. Without the hat it just  hang freely the two tufts still framing his face.

Non visual information: When he speaks, his voice is impossibly deep but smooth seemingly resonates with the air, dark and elegant in its tone; commanding, dominating, and enchanting. There is also a faint smell of gunpowder around him due to him using guns allot. Other than that he tries to keep clean and not smell anything since some people he hunt might be zoans with a good sense of smell.

Clothing: Kenshin wears a long black coat that's usually keep't closed. the sleeves hanging down as he usually have his hands on the pistols inside the cloak. Beneath the cloak he wears a black V collar tunic. over the tunic he have a belt diagonally going down from the left to the right. on this small throwing knifes or simple bags to put bullets in are usually hanged. He also wears a belt around his waist from wich holsters for his pistols are hanging. A pair of black skin pants with light metal plating from the knees down along with the cowboy like boths complete's his attire. He also wears a black cowboy like hat with a metal piece formed like a feather but with a sharp edge that can be used as a throwing knife in emergencies. He also wears a black scarf putting his face in shadow making it really hard to extinguish his features.

For colder climates he dons a furred dark brown coat with the bottom almost touching the floor. with a hood with with fur along the edges.  He also wears a pair of black leather gloves with furred inside to keep his hands warm. To top that off he wear a pair of simple skin boots with fur on the inside on his feet

Extra features: he have a scar over his nose ridge from a sword.


-Personality information-

Personality Overview: Kenshin is truly an enigma. A master beguiler, it is supremely difficult to determine his real personality. However there are a number of traits that can be attributed to him, given his ability to maintain this disguises, and the subtle yet similar characteristics all of his persona's maintain.

Above all, he is patient, not only with himself but to others as well. He can be known to fade into the background, quietly watching and observing those around him. Even in conversation he'll nod and interject when appropriate, but he is always patiently learning the mannerisms, characteristics, and motives of those around him. After which he'll carefully construct the most appropriate persona for which to interact with them as necessary. This trait has allowed him to gauge the reactions and respond appropriately to the people around him, letting their assumptions, and perceptions become truth. If others are too blind to see the reality before their eyes, then he is quite content to let them continue on living in that illusion world.

Ruthlessness is another characteristic attributed to him. He is willing to use whatever means necessary to complete his objective without any regard to moral ethics. Although he does not take any pleasure from his actions he will kill as necessary, even those who were supposedly allies or superiors. He will cut them down without hesitation, but only if it is necessary. He is determined, dedicated, and willing to go through great lengths to complete whatever objective he has.

During his missions, especially ones where he is tasked to hunt down a rogue operative, Kenshin has so far abandoned the use of persona's. This is largely due to the fact that such opponents are often extremely powerful, and often times psychotic sociopaths or ones who with strong antisocial behavior. Therefore attempting to persuade them through other means is largely a waste, considering his skills, it is best dealt in a straightforward manner. However against opponents he believes to be more powerful than him, Kenshin will don whatever mask necessary to lead them into a false sense of security before killing them.


Likes, the paycheck he gets from capturing pirates and other wanted persons.
Dislikes, Dislike peoples who interfere with his work
Hopes to one day be known as the best gun/rifle user in the world
Fears:  


-History information-**

Kenshins parents was both well known assassins/bounty hunters in the west blue. They meet during a job and after some attempts to kill each other they ended up spending the night together and feel in love. the result of that love was kenshin. Once his mother found out she was pregnant they withdrew from the bounty hunting and settled to a small peaceful island in the west blue. His father got appointed peace keeper. A few months after that happened kenshin was born and all was well they where happy with their new life.

Childhood:
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The slaughter:
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the tattoo man:
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The hellish years:
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Top of his class the reward:
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The goodbye exploring the big wide world:
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Relationships with other characters: (list and link names, describe the relationship and update often)*


-Stats-
Strength:  10
Endurance: 10
Speed: 20
Agility: 30
Skill:  30
Tactical intelligence: 10
Practical intelligence:   10
Perception: 30
Charisma and leadership: 10
Devil fruit control:
Armor haki 0%

stats 160% deployed

Equipment List-

His ship
2 flintlock pistols.
1 cutlass
2 higher quality flintlocks LINK
15 clips containing 15 bullets each (total of 225 bullets)


-Abilities-

Ability Points: 0

stuff ap point is used on
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Passive traits:
marine knowledge: knows where marine bases are located. and stations where criminals can be turned in for the bounty.
Perfect Memory
Strategy Games
Puzzles
acrobatics << (based on agility stat though its just there due to how he was raised)
ambidexterity is as good with his left as with his right

Devil Fruit: none

Talents:
doctor


Learned skills:

Marksmanship: long ranged weapons are Kenshins specialty just like his father before him that he have set out to master.

Sharpshooting: the ability to hit target from great distances like a sniper.

Gunslinger: A gunslinger by definition is someone who uses side-arms to both rapidly and accurately attack a target to deal lethal damage. they could hit a coin 5 times before it even hits the ground and fire another round to change the trajectory of their first one, and can even ricochet bullets around corners to hit their target. A gunslinger also uses their guns in close range combat for example holding them by the barrel and attack with the buts. or with enough skill use the barrel to deflect swords and knifes and other ranged projectiles.


Techniques lists:


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PostSubject: Re: Kenshin Yagami    Kenshin Yagami  Icon_minitimeSun Feb 09, 2014 5:55 pm

Befire I look further, just a basic overview of errors...

Your appearance needs more. There should be a full paragraph in each, except extra features, which is optional. Next, your history is also a bit light. You need each part to be at least a paragraph, if you are only having 5 parts.

Once you fix those basic errors, I'll review in greater detail to see if there are any less noticeable issues.
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PostSubject: Re: Kenshin Yagami    Kenshin Yagami  Icon_minitimeSun Feb 09, 2014 9:06 pm

Now rememeber you asked for this.  
 
You may have cetain abilities in passive traits that are bare minimum versions of what you can have in the talents section.  Wilderness surival is much too complex.  Acrobatics would go off of agility so they should be removed.  
 
The nine man ship needs to be made in the equipment section.  
 
You need to either explain that your stealth clothing.  If it's even slightly more advanced than a black hoody with black pants you need to make it in the equipment section.
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PostSubject: Re: Kenshin Yagami    Kenshin Yagami  Icon_minitimeMon Feb 10, 2014 1:20 am

Character is officially approved, upon approval of your ship. As soon as it is approved, so is this. Congrats. Even crow said it was a good piece of work xD *claps* ENCORE ENCORE ENCORE
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PostSubject: Re: Kenshin Yagami    Kenshin Yagami  Icon_minitimeSun Feb 23, 2014 11:51 pm

added 2 pistols and some bullets links are in place and equipment thread up
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PostSubject: Re: Kenshin Yagami    Kenshin Yagami  Icon_minitimeMon Feb 24, 2014 12:18 am

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PostSubject: Re: Kenshin Yagami    Kenshin Yagami  Icon_minitimeThu Mar 06, 2014 5:06 pm

-20 ap purchasing arment/armor (dunno wich is correct) for him.
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PostSubject: Re: Kenshin Yagami    Kenshin Yagami  Icon_minitimeThu Mar 06, 2014 5:19 pm

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