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"Fire Kid" Blake

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PostSubject: Crusher   Crusher Icon_minitimeSun May 06, 2012 6:20 pm

weapon name:Crusher
description:Crusher VampireAnimeBoy (weapon in the hand), the chains are used to squeeze the life outta you before you get cut, it weighs about 100 lbs, it is made of seastone
weapon special abilities: Can split the ground and crush most objects
History:Crusher was made for a rebel leader in ancient times after seeing the power of the sword which had been cursed by the communist-like king in his dying breath the rebel leader then he buried it deep within the depths of which would become Santo Blake and Danto's house. Santo decided to go digging looking for gold and Found the sword instead the gang saw the gang as something that would go high on the black market and decided to harass Santo


Last edited by Portgaz D. Blaze on Mon May 28, 2012 3:43 pm; edited 16 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Crusher   Crusher Icon_minitimeMon May 07, 2012 11:00 am

You'll have to be a little more specific. How much does it weight? What materials can it break? Can ti be broken? What is it made of? how big is it and are those chains a part of the weapon? I can't approve weapons by a single picture and a faint description, you're going to have to work harder.
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"Fire Kid" Blake

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PostSubject: Re: Crusher   Crusher Icon_minitimeWed May 16, 2012 11:37 pm

Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Crusher   Crusher Icon_minitimeThu May 17, 2012 8:53 am

How exactly can it shoot lightning? And I'm afraid curses don't exist in One Piece...
In addition, since the sword is made out of such a durable material, it shouldn't even be possible to shape it like a sword, at all, making it unacceptable. Also, a human-sized sword made entirely out of a durable mineral and weighting this much is kinda unreasonable, it should weight more which would make it pretty much unusable unless you're going to make a giant to go with that, which would in turn make the human-size unreasonable. In other words, that particular material can't work.
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"Fire Kid" Blake

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PostSubject: Re: Crusher   Crusher Icon_minitimeThu May 17, 2012 5:35 pm

Sleepy wrote:
How exactly can it shoot lightning? And I'm afraid curses don't exist in One Piece...
In addition, since the sword is made out of such a durable material, it shouldn't even be possible to shape it like a sword, at all, making it unacceptable. Als

Wht about Zoro's cursed sword and I edited
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PostSubject: Re: Crusher   Crusher Icon_minitimeThu May 17, 2012 5:37 pm

Why must you deal with only one problem at a time? You have yet to explain how does it produce electricity, the weight is still ridiculous (Will your char legitimately be able to swing 250 lbs Like a weapon?) And I guess the curse is ok if it has no effect, my bad on this one.
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PostSubject: Re: Crusher   Crusher Icon_minitimeThu May 17, 2012 6:21 pm

Edited out electricity and ridiculous weight
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PostSubject: Re: Crusher   Crusher Icon_minitimeThu May 17, 2012 6:30 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Crusher   Crusher Icon_minitimeMon May 28, 2012 2:37 pm

needs re approval
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PostSubject: Re: Crusher   Crusher Icon_minitimeMon May 28, 2012 2:38 pm

I'll need you to tell me what you changed so I could review it.
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"Fire Kid" Blake

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PostSubject: Re: Crusher   Crusher Icon_minitimeMon May 28, 2012 2:39 pm

the material its made of and I added an ability
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PostSubject: Re: Crusher   Crusher Icon_minitimeMon May 28, 2012 2:55 pm

I changed the material from Black Iron to Seastone and I added an ability allowing it to create shockwaves if stuck into the ground
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PostSubject: Re: Crusher   Crusher Icon_minitimeMon May 28, 2012 3:28 pm

The Edit button exists for a reason, please refrain from double posting. Creating shockwaves is an unexplained ability, and in most cases it's a skill of the swordsman rather than his weapon, so either explain how it is done or take it off completely. The seastone is ok since there's no rule that forbids it.
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PostSubject: Re: Crusher   Crusher Icon_minitimeMon May 28, 2012 3:38 pm

Santo slashes/sticks the sword in the ground at a fair distance from the intended target(s), so instead of the fist connecting, it uses the water vapor in the air to release a shock wave that sends them flying.
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PostSubject: Re: Crusher   Crusher Icon_minitimeMon May 28, 2012 3:41 pm

Then the sword has nothing to do with the creation of the shockwave... it can be done with any weapon so it isn't the sword's special ability and therefore doesn't belong in here
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PostSubject: Re: Crusher   Crusher Icon_minitimeMon May 28, 2012 3:44 pm

Taken out(also could you check my other weapon the chain lasso)
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PostSubject: Re: Crusher   Crusher Icon_minitimeMon May 28, 2012 3:46 pm

REAPPROVED
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