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PostSubject: daraku daraku fruit (corrupt corrupt fruit)   daraku daraku fruit (corrupt corrupt fruit) Icon_minitimeSun Sep 11, 2011 6:37 am

Name: daraku daraku fruit/ corrupt corrupt fruit

Ability: turns your skin to dark brown colour which for a limted amount of time it double your speed and strenght but for the cost of shorten your lifespan and corrupt your mind to use this technique it takes a good chunk of your stamina but for the price of these drawbacks it gives you great strenght and speed making ur strenght strong enough to break thourgh steal and speed becoming faster then a soru user however the user can only uses this for 1 minutes this can be improved but it takes years of training. note when you transfrom your body it changes into a brown dark skin colour also you gain long hair which come down to back you also gain sharp spikes coming out of your back these spike have a few attacking possability.note when you maste this ability your able to do partial transformation like you could change ur legs into the dark skin colour for a limted time but also drains your stamnia but not as much as full form you can also do this on your spike on your back.

in game effects use this ability for 3 turns after i go down to 80% effectiveness for 8 turns i can use this skill again after 2 turns

type: paramecia








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PostSubject: Re: daraku daraku fruit (corrupt corrupt fruit)   daraku daraku fruit (corrupt corrupt fruit) Icon_minitimeSun Sep 11, 2011 6:42 am

1. Losing stamina and shortening lifespan don't really do anything as far as Roleplay is concernned. 2. Please turn the time (3 minute) into posts.
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PostSubject: Re: daraku daraku fruit (corrupt corrupt fruit)   daraku daraku fruit (corrupt corrupt fruit) Icon_minitimeSun Sep 11, 2011 6:45 am

changed to one minute
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PostSubject: Re: daraku daraku fruit (corrupt corrupt fruit)   daraku daraku fruit (corrupt corrupt fruit) Icon_minitimeSun Sep 11, 2011 6:47 am

The problem isn't the specific time, its that time itself isn't quantifiable in an rp. Over the course of a post it could be a minute, a second, an hour, you name it.
Please turn the time limit into a post limit instead.
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PostSubject: Re: daraku daraku fruit (corrupt corrupt fruit)   daraku daraku fruit (corrupt corrupt fruit) Icon_minitimeSun Sep 11, 2011 7:00 am

Well, its good enough for a start, I guess. Please make sure the "corruption" is actually relevant in story, otherwise you've wasted quite a bit of my time working out the details of a corruption fruit.

FYI Posts are done in third person
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