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Ugitzu

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PostSubject: Grey "the corrupt" Archfield   Grey "the corrupt" Archfield Icon_minitimeSun Aug 15, 2010 9:24 am

Name: Grey "The Corrupt" Archfield

[b]Age: 23

[b]Bounty: N/A

[b]Species:
Human

Occupation: Swordsman/Inventor/Former Marine Captain

Allegiance: World Government/Marines

Home Village/Ocean: Grandline

Appearance: Gray has the look of someone mysterious and someone who cannot be trusted. Long, dark black hair. Piercing death filled gray eyes. The expression of someone who doesn't have a care in the world. Wearing a black sleeveless jacket with a red zipper, never bothering to zip it. pebble like gold earring pierced in each ear covered by the long black hair. Side burns reaching to the man's mouth, in the shape of a dagger. Black gloves with the navy's seal on each hand. A tattoo of a black heart on his left shoulder. A casual hat perched on the top of his head. Black jeans with white lines flowing down like a river starting from the waist to the black boots on each side of the man. A ripped chest and abdomen, possessing a black tattoo of barbed wire starting at the chest flowing down. The barbed wire tattoo looking like its moving like a slithering snake. Semi-muscular arms and a small goatee at the end of his chin. Behind the man, lays the powerful and large sword known as Harugan, sheathed in black leather wrap.

History: Its long
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Personality: As a first impression, the man seems to not have a care in the world. Sighing and possessing a mean streak look folding his arms. Socially, Grey is not only professional but stiff. Not really giving much effort into any type of humor or individuality. At times, he can be a total Jack*** especially when fighting others. Though deep down, the man is actually conniving and cautious. He isn't ignorant to obvious danger and he seems to always make the decision that would save him from a life-death situation. Though, he is very bold, never seeming to back down and is never intimidated. People may identify him as ruthless, giving no remorse to his enemies. In battle, Grey loves getting into his opponent's head, messing with their emotions. Trying to weaken them mentally. Grey isn't the type of person who gives into hierarchy, he doesn't like having superiors or subordinates. Defiant to his superiors and calling his subordinates useless, could infer that he is independent, a lone wolf. Though for a long time, Grey has had a desire, infatuation into becoming a marine admiral. Obsessed with the position, he looks at the current admirals in fury and envy.

Ship: Masquerade: created by Jinks the ship is very fast with a sail. The white wood is very hard to penetrate, but not impossible. The ship contains a deck, cellars, chambers and much more. It is rather small, due to only having a few occasional passengers. The front is a yellow arch in which travels the direction the current tells it to. The ship is five years old, also having a shifting and submarine feature. Large lens appear to increase speed or cover the entire ship to prepare underwater travel. 35 ft tall and 23 ft wide. also having a small motor in the cellar area.

Ship Flag: The flag represents the world government, with the nostalgic marine insignia. the flag is 4 ft tall and 6 ft wide.

Devil Fruit: N/A
type: N/A
effect: N/A

Special Abilities: Grey is very swift with his legs, he can slide and attack easily. Grey is very powerful, being able to swing a 135 ib weapon at high speed. He is also very resistant to pain, able to take many devastating blows without passing out. Grey is very athletic, can jump high distances and can swim at fast rates defying many forms of friction. Grey is analytic, always having a gameplan. Grey is also very skilled in hand to hand combat as well as an able swordsman who shreds instead of slashing. Lastly, Grey is intuitive, and his reflexes are top notch, able to see something coming at hyper speed. Sometimes not realizing it.`

The four techniques of Kumokiri: Kumokiri means cloud mist, representing the use of physical strength and the power to manipulate the body's muscles to the fullest capacity. The people who learned these techniques were told by others to have the ability to fade away like mist and everything they touched were as soft as clouds. This legend was not confirmed, they are a scarce few who know this style, but this style is only used by the most durable and resilient.

Louois: The user exerts his muscles to the max able to make the earth seem like quicksand. The earth is not manipulated, but is forced out of its normal position. It will seem like cracks will appear below the user as he uses his arms or his feet to make rocks or walls, limited to only twice his height and lower appear out of nowhere. The user can simply force his hands into the ground and throw a large rock at the opponent. The remains of that area will be completely altered, by the backlash of the user's power. Though the user is not safe by any means if the solid turns into debris. This technique actually requires full concentration, the bigger the mass the more energy it zaps from the user.

Blitz: The user possesses the ability to move at speeds it did not know of before. The user can run, slide, and jump at a tremendous 70-90 miles per hour. Though the user might feel light headed, exhausted, or even their leg muscles might have strain that could handicap the user. The strain is quite rare.

Dalia: (known as the iron body technique) The user possesses the ability to make his body tough and durable like a wall. Their skin feels like steel, their bones feel like gold. This ability is used to provide a guard against physical attacks, it may even allow the user to grab weapons and fists without struggle. The boost in strength is tremendous, but the weakness of the move is irritable. The user feels as if his stamina is being zapped away continuously, and the ability requires the user's lower body to stand completely still. The technique does not stop elemental powers from damaging the body. Fire will burn the body, ice will freeze the body, electricity will zap the body. Though air will possess a little difficulty from even making the user flinch, and repel techniques just make the body even more durable. The legend to this technique is that the user feels like everything is a cloud to him.

Kania: The user pushes his or her muscles to create shock waves that travel five yards. A mid range technique that power ranges in the users physical strength. The shock waves are 16 feet long and 20 feet wide. The shock wave possess the potency to cut through rock and other substances, also causing moderate damage to life forms who are hit by it. The technique can be evaded easily from afar, but might be extremely difficult to evade close up.

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25): Chainsaw Ripper:A move which allows the user to crash the ground with so much power, the shock will throw someone back. The recoil of the move will make the blade vibrate like a chainsaw, for thirty seconds the weapon could be used as a chainsaw if there are spikes on the weapon.

Rolling Masquerade:A technique requiring the user to spin their body and weapon at incredible speeds, slashing the earth rolling up and down like a wheel. Anything made in contact would collapse or be cut into shreds unless it was a wall or something incredibly durable stopping the attack from continuing.

Malicious Charade:The attack consisted of the user swinging his sword horizontally sending a vibration in the air to cut through flesh and to change the direction of a powerful melee or mid range attack to the left

Vertical Ripper: The user slashes his her blade down, if it meets flesh or weapon the user can wrench his her blade backwards. If in contact with flesh it will rip apart, normally used with weapons that possess sharp ends.

Weapons/Items: Harugan

Goals:Find his purpose in life. Become an marine admiral


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PostSubject: Re: Grey "the corrupt" Archfield   Grey "the corrupt" Archfield Icon_minitimeSun Aug 15, 2010 10:29 am

I like this character immensely, can we have him join the pheonix squad?

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PostSubject: Re: Grey "the corrupt" Archfield   Grey "the corrupt" Archfield Icon_minitimeSun Aug 15, 2010 1:00 pm

thank you, what is the pheonix squad, can I have a link?
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PostSubject: Re: Grey "the corrupt" Archfield   Grey "the corrupt" Archfield Icon_minitimeMon Aug 16, 2010 6:53 am

can you also consider about joining the CP9?
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PostSubject: Re: Grey "the corrupt" Archfield   Grey "the corrupt" Archfield Icon_minitimeMon Aug 16, 2010 7:04 am

already joining Pheonix squad
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PostSubject: Re: Grey "the corrupt" Archfield   Grey "the corrupt" Archfield Icon_minitimeTue Aug 17, 2010 12:57 am

So much peer pressure from you, Niki.
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PostSubject: Re: Grey "the corrupt" Archfield   Grey "the corrupt" Archfield Icon_minitimeTue Aug 17, 2010 1:24 am

Sad im sorry, i didnt mean it
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PostSubject: Re: Grey "the corrupt" Archfield   Grey "the corrupt" Archfield Icon_minitimeTue Aug 17, 2010 1:39 am

I'm just kidding around. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Grey "the corrupt" Archfield   Grey "the corrupt" Archfield Icon_minitimeMon Sep 06, 2010 3:30 pm

update: Kumokiri abilities
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PostSubject: Re: Grey "the corrupt" Archfield   Grey "the corrupt" Archfield Icon_minitimeMon Sep 06, 2010 7:48 pm

is this a martial art you made or an actual one piece canon style
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PostSubject: Re: Grey "the corrupt" Archfield   Grey "the corrupt" Archfield Icon_minitimeMon Sep 06, 2010 8:11 pm

A martial art I made. Is it still plausible or do I have to erase it?
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PostSubject: Re: Grey "the corrupt" Archfield   Grey "the corrupt" Archfield Icon_minitimeMon Sep 06, 2010 8:52 pm

im not sure..... it looks plausible i guess, i can give you saku, but not blitz, or blitz but not saku,all speed unless born with , is at soru level. and im supposing Kania is a version of rokougan?
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PostSubject: Re: Grey "the corrupt" Archfield   Grey "the corrupt" Archfield Icon_minitimeMon Sep 06, 2010 9:26 pm

Ok so I can use Blitz but not saku, ok I'm fine with that. No much different, one could compare Kanai to an actual shockwave. Rokuougan is like a repel move, Kania slices, Rokuougan shocks. An example is Malicious charade, though Kanai is much more powerful and wide ranged.


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PostSubject: Re: Grey "the corrupt" Archfield   Grey "the corrupt" Archfield Icon_minitimeMon Sep 06, 2010 9:33 pm

ok then, your martial art will be observed

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