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PostSubject: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeMon Jun 15, 2009 7:26 pm

Name: Unknown

Age: 17ish

Bounty: none

Species: Human

Allegiance:Whoever takes her in

Home Village/Ocean: Grandline

Appearance: https://i.servimg.com/u/f61/13/21/07/61/anime_11.jpg

History: Her earliest memories where of hiding. She knew not when she first ate that Devil fruit but since then she made her life through theft and stowing away. She traveled the grandline and saw some of the greatest pirates in history. As a mute she only ever had one friend for but a day, the man who could hear the voice of all things. Whether she just never talks or is unable to talk is unknown. Despite her power she did often get in confrontations and had to learn how to fight and hide and run without it's use. She spent all her time either training or surviving. Leaving the petite girl with no social skills and running on pure instinct.
The closest family she has is a night black saber tigress type creature who she met in her travels. An intelligent animal that is independent enough to have its own "Ambition". What that ambition is, one can only guess. She learnt most of her ability to sneak from the night-saber, and it often acts like a mother to her. Using their ability to sneak and her devil fruits power, it was not that hard for the tigress to accompany her on her travels. The tigress responds to the name "Miiiiaaahhh" or Mia, essentially the girls way of imitating Mia's low pitched meorwls.

Personality: She is, demure and shy, though if caged trapped, she responds like an animal, silently brutal and emotionless. She often acts like an animal if inclined to show affection as she was never taught how to respond as a human.

Ship: None

Ship Flag: none

Name: hitoshirezu doragon no mi (hidden dragon fruit)

Named thus for its ability to be able to hide a dragon

Ability: Creates a bubble around the user making anything inside the the bubble Invisible and inaudible to anything outside the bubble. The effect will never cause anything to look out of the ordinary, like a ships hull of water missing from the ocean.

Nothing inside the buble can interact with anything outside the bubble.
The fruit user can never leave the bubble

Type: Parmecia.

Special Abilities: Twin short blade style, Twin medium blade style, Two handed short and medium blade styles. Silent soru(Pussyfoot). Tiger riding,

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):

1: Silent Soru
2: hitoshirezu doragon Bubble
3: hitoshirezu doragon Bubble Shrink- Shrinks the bubble in size
4: hitoshirezu doragon Bubble Grow- grows the bubble in size
5: Hide in shadows
6: Leap from shadows- By using Silent soru she can leap from shadows in to shadows without being noticed.
7: Backstab- While hidden in shadows she can sneak behind someone and stab them, this does critical damage as it aims for critical organs.
8-23 Unknown yet
24: Hidden dragon- Second skin. This shrinks the bubble to just around her skin. It require a lot of concentration. Due to the nature of the skin of the bubble it makes her immune to certain attacks. For example a punch it will go in to the bubble but because nothing inside the bubble can interfere with anything outside the bubble it will just pass through her with no effect. However if an object could completely fit inside the bubble unattached to anything outside the bubble like a projectile, it will pass though the bubble and "Appear" inside her causing extra damage, but with no entrance and exit wound making surgery much harder and making the wound much more life threatening. Note she cant use attacks in this form. Also not she is still invisible in this form so it's unlikely a bullet will hit her. This is a double edged sword defense, it is useful for escaping a blade storm for example but extremly dangerous against blasts of shrapnel and lots of projectile fire.

25: Hidden dragon final technique. Grows the bubble large enough to hide an entire island

Weapons/Items: Katana of all sizes, Knives, Rope, Smoke Bombs.

Goals: To find all that's hidden
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PostSubject: Re: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeMon Jun 15, 2009 9:57 pm

Um...personality, though it';s short, I can see what you're going for.
I have to ask how Soru is silent. Can it be?
((not an admin. When no one is online I guess I try to help))
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PostSubject: Re: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeTue Jun 16, 2009 4:40 pm

I have no idea how it can be silent either, but i was told by admin sama that it could be and if anyone can do it she can. Besides pussyfoot seems quite an appropriate name no? Meow.
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PostSubject: Re: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeTue Jun 16, 2009 4:41 pm

as to her personality, to be honest she doesn't really have much of one, she's got lots to learn, i get to consider charecter development quite carefully, which is fun.
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PostSubject: Re: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeTue Jun 16, 2009 4:45 pm

yeaaaah Im not touchin' this one with a ten foot poll... good thing there are OTHER admins than me isnt it?
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PostSubject: Re: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeTue Jun 16, 2009 7:30 pm

This seems simple enough. A stealth based character with an animal companion. I think this is fine as she doesn't seem to have many offensive capabilities herself. And the fruit has already been approved. I vote for approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeTue Jun 16, 2009 7:36 pm

I second that. You were over reacting Admin-sama.
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PostSubject: Re: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeTue Jun 16, 2009 7:38 pm

I third that.
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PostSubject: Re: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeTue Jun 16, 2009 8:04 pm

well I guess Im wrong like always then huh? Anyway you dont NEED all 25 techniques thats just the limit and I have a guide for writing adiquate personalitie descriptions but now that your character is approved I see no point in posting it but I have another idea, I will PROVE my suspisiopns by having her fight any of my characters and you will all see!
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PostSubject: Re: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeTue Jun 16, 2009 8:39 pm

We will all see what? What will that prove?
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PostSubject: Re: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeTue Jun 16, 2009 8:43 pm

youll see you'll ALL see! just you wait and see! (assuming he agrees to this)
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PostSubject: Re: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeTue Jun 16, 2009 8:44 pm

See what?! Please explain what fighting this character will show us.
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PostSubject: Re: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeTue Jun 16, 2009 8:50 pm

that you cant react to what you cant proceve and therefore no one can react to this character's attack (no vicual+ no aoudio = undetectable by normal means) and will result in compleatly one sided fights
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PostSubject: Re: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeTue Jun 16, 2009 10:06 pm

Fine, challenge him, but you would have to use the chibi lounge, assuming it isn't a real fight.
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PostSubject: Re: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeTue Jun 16, 2009 10:07 pm

why wouldent it be?
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PostSubject: Re: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeTue Jun 16, 2009 10:23 pm

Well is his character approved?
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PostSubject: Re: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeTue Jun 16, 2009 10:26 pm

I said I wasnt touching this one, but Irrational approved it
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PostSubject: Re: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeTue Jun 16, 2009 10:30 pm

Right, forget I said that.
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PostSubject: Re: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeWed Jun 17, 2009 12:07 am

I mean, if the problem is personality, I think it is sufficient. The character doesn't talk so the way a character talks can't be included in the personality. It states that she keeps to herself and acts similar to a wild animal if in a battle. The personality is sparse, but one would expect that from a mute recluse.
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PostSubject: Re: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeWed Jun 17, 2009 12:21 am

Thanks irational, someone understands. Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Unknown   Unknown Icon_minitimeWed Jun 17, 2009 12:25 am

This character is approved, so if you wanted to rejoin that RP, you can now.
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