First of all, appearance should go before history and it should be a larger paragraph, at least a bit longer than that one, but include as much detail as you can about your character. The history paragraph is extremely short. It needs to be at least two long paragraphs, but further detail is encouraged. Your personality paragraph could be a little longer. Remember this paragraph will determine how your character usually reacts to certain situations and what he likes what he hopes, etc.
Please, follow the order set in the character sheet, and if a category doesn't apply to your character write N/A in it.
Your Special Abilities section is way too vague: master at unarmed combat, very few can beat him. Okay so you saying this would be saying like 3/4 of a yonkou crew might not be able to beat you? You need to attempt to quantify his proficiency: is he at the level of a Black Belt? Level of an apprentice? Furthermore, you can't start out as being a "Master" in a fighting style without putting any effort into it. Saying his kicks can be fatal is excessive. Fatal blows should be gained through roleplay and it's not like you manage to kick someone in the arm and they lose it...
Similarly, you need to categorize the stuff you can do with your character into techniques. That is why you have a Technique Lists area there. If you want a kick that might be fatal or able to cause internal damage you need to describe it.
Okay you can say that he's resistant to torture due to marine training and stuff, but every character has a limit to fatigue. Unless your character is really advanced, you're probably not going to be able to run from one side of Alabasta to the other one, despite how much willpower you have, your body just isn't capable. Fatigue is a way of your body saying that it needs rest because if not something will go wrong.
Please correct all of these. And take into consideration that a character sheet should be as detailed as possible in order to promote fair role playing. A character sheet that is, as you can appreciate, almost as long as my post describing what you need to add and correct is unacceptable...
I hope you find some inspiration and detail your character further. I'm looking forward to seeing you get better at this, remember no one is perfect and that it is completely fine to make mistakes the first times, because you're human. Just learn from them for the future.