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PostSubject: [Finished] Temple Fugate [Doctor]   [Finished] Temple Fugate [Doctor] Icon_minitimeThu Jul 25, 2013 10:31 am

Name: Temple Fugate

Age: 35

Bounty: 5,000 beli

Species: Human

Occupation: Doctor, Amateur Watchmaker, chemist

Allegiance: Pirate

Home Village/Ocean: Drum island

Appearance: [Finished] Temple Fugate [Doctor] The_Clock_King_by_DunkelDasRosenol

History:
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Personality: Temple is a man of control. He LOVES order and control and his insanity is very well based around a complex case of OCD. Temple does not fear death, but rather he challenges Death, wanting to know just how long he has left in life. He is very intelligent, far smarter than any normal person, but often his intelligence is hidden behind is eccentricities. Constantly keeping track of time, he hates being late and demands order in his life. He is also very unstable, having shown on many times in his life to react unpredictably once his plans start to go out of control. A Master of time, Temple can manipulate a person's perception of time with subtle suggestion and has been known to hypnotise a person using that perception of time. A genius doctor as well, Temple knows exactly how a body operates, noticing any flaw immediately and knowing exactly how to act against it.

Ship: n/a

Ship Flag: n/a

Devil Fruit: Limited to only three devil fruit users per person
Type: (only if you have a devil fruit)
Effect: (only if you have a devil fruit)

Special Abilities: Master of Time: Temple has a perfectly tuned mental clock ticking away in his head and has a perfect perception of how time operates and how he can manipulate a person's sense of time. He can also accurately keep in time with hundreds of different things at once and can understand the timing of an enemy very easily.

Hapkido: Temple only started to learn Hapkido as an extracurricular activity, he soon found that the martial art suited him perfectly. A martial art focusing on body strikes and pressure points, it is often uses throws and holds to defeat the enemy instead of punches and kicks.

Hypnotism: A more real form of hypnotic suggestion, The time it takes to hypnotize a person varies depending on the situation at hand, Temple has on many occasion performed a successful hypnotism in less than 10 minutes, but he cannot perform a hypnotism as fluidly or as swiftly as one of those magical hypnotists. Can only be used on NPCs and Player approved characters, is NOT an auto-hit, not is it allowed to be used on anyone like that.

Doctor: Temple is a certifiable Doctor with skills in surgery and analysis. Temple can identify a medical problem with anyone as soon as he begins inspecting them and can apply surgical strikes with quick and precise and flawless technique. There are few who are better doctors than him that are out there.

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25): Surgical Fracture: Temple grabs his enemy and squeezes, breaking whatever it is he and grabbed.

Imaginary Bullet: Temple shoves his tumb into his foe, breaking the skin and causing damage wherever he hits. He isn't strong enough to break bone, nor is his thumb actually as fast as a bullet, so this cannot be referred to as a Shigan.

Godless Hand Stroke: A throw technique that uses reaction and instinct on the enemy's part to trick them into throwing themselves, allowing him to throw them anywhere without ever really touching them.

Weapons/Items: a few scalpels, a dinghy, and a stopwatch that is perfectly wound (The watch is pure metal with a sturdy casing and a five foot long retractable metal line that makes his watch work like a flail as well)

Character Flaws: Insane, OCD

Goals: To find a new purpose in life while entertaining himself with his new freedom in life.


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PostSubject: Re: [Finished] Temple Fugate [Doctor]   [Finished] Temple Fugate [Doctor] Icon_minitimeSun Jul 28, 2013 11:17 am

Only thing I'm concerned is the hypnotism, as far as I know it's not an allowed ability. Although, if you limit it to only work on NPC chars, and only on those of average will or strength-levels, then it should be okay.
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PostSubject: Re: [Finished] Temple Fugate [Doctor]   [Finished] Temple Fugate [Doctor] Icon_minitimeSun Jul 28, 2013 6:53 pm

Hypnotism should be alright as long as it's purely suggestion and not literal mind control. Under no circumstances can you "call hits" or the like. As stated here:

https://theonepiecerp.rpg-board.net/t2080-banned-abilities

Just tossing in my 2 cents. Still up to Shadow though, since he responded to the app first.
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PostSubject: Re: [Finished] Temple Fugate [Doctor]   [Finished] Temple Fugate [Doctor] Icon_minitimeSun Jul 28, 2013 7:54 pm

This isn't an active combat ability. This isn't mind control or anything, it's how suggestion really works. And of course it's only for NPCs.
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PostSubject: Re: [Finished] Temple Fugate [Doctor]   [Finished] Temple Fugate [Doctor] Icon_minitimeMon Jul 29, 2013 4:18 am

Still, it would be much better if you actually write that in the abilities section, those NPC things we've mentioned. Then he'll be good to go.
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PostSubject: Re: [Finished] Temple Fugate [Doctor]   [Finished] Temple Fugate [Doctor] Icon_minitimeThu Aug 01, 2013 3:32 pm

sorry it took me a while, i had other stuff, i edited it
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PostSubject: Re: [Finished] Temple Fugate [Doctor]   [Finished] Temple Fugate [Doctor] Icon_minitimeThu Aug 01, 2013 4:22 pm

You do not have to worry about that.
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thanks
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