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PostSubject: Emrick K. Locke   Emrick K. Locke Icon_minitimeSat Jul 13, 2013 5:37 pm

Name: Emrick Locke

Age:27

Bounty: 15,000,000 beli

Species: Human

Occupation: Fighter/Musician
Allegiance: Pirate

Home Village/Ocean: North Blue

Appearance: Emerick is 5’6 muscular yet skinny form, his hair is black and slicked back with a few white lines threw it. His eyes are a light grey with a hint of aqua blue near the bottom, he has sideburns that go past his ears and usually has a stubble that leads down to a tuft of hair on his chin. He has a stitched up scar from his right cheekbone to mid cheek and a sword scar on his left from just on his neck up his cheek under his left eye, it continues across onto his forehead.
Usually Emrick will wear just a black vest that’s a bit short on him with a fur collar, attached to it are 2 straps on both sides that hang down connecting to the back. Underneath is a toned body with a 6 pack , across his chest are the words “No glory in killing the weak” and below that he makes a note of it to keep a tally of powerful people he has beaten, which counts to 0
A bown leather belt holds up a pair of khaki colored pants tucked into a pair of boots, his right leg has a knee pad and his left foreleg has a few bandages wrapped around, around his neck is a miniature sword that says “always “ on the front  and “with you” on the back. Usually he’ll wear a pair of fingerless black gloves.
History: Emrick grew up in a mining village that happened to be settled right next to a small volcano, because of his father’s mining and his mothers working he was usually left alone to do what he pleased, he made some friends but normally people wouldn’t pay attention to him. Then one day when he was small his father was taken by a group of pirates to make him work at their mine on a different island along with other miners. Emrick cried for days and before he could tell everything was back to normal, but he wasn’t, he tried to hide it behind laughs and jokes but some people saw threw.
Emrick in his off time after becoming 15 trained secretly with a katana slashing an old tree that had the general shape of a humans body, he would at times hurt himself and wouldn’t return home for days, when he had to mine he did it and kept some of the excess profits selling it here and there. Again when he was 19 the Pirates came, Emrick was about to attack them when the village elder put her cane up to his chest ( now dressed in his normal apparel) and shook her head, there were many more of them than him. He bit his tongue as they picked over the villagers, when they got to him the long bearded man cocked his head,” nah dis boy looks like he might be o’use” he grabbed Emrick’s shoulder and threw him with the others being taken, “I hope I’m right” they were walked onto the ship and they started the journey to the other island  it took a month but when they arrived all they could see was ash, it was a volcanic island with small pockets of hospitable land and smack on the shore was a large camp of people mining in shackles.

The day of Emrick being inducted into the mining was a day away so they let a few of the people roam before they had to work for the rest of their lives, Emrick chose to walk to a lone tree on a ashen hill, it seemed charred but not dead, his lips were dry and there was a strange fruit hanging in the tree, he reached up and grabbed it then ate it whole, when he stood up he began walking away back towards the camp but felt light, he looked down to see his arms were melting, he jumped in surprise and tried to run but it continued until he skidded to a halt and his arms returned to normal, on the other side of the field was the leader pirate and his accomplices looking at him slack jawed.
“ what did ye eat boy!” the leader ran at him drawing his sword,” you ate my Fruit!” he grabbed Arron's mouth ad looked inside, when he saw nothing he pushed Emrick down,"kill this worm" he took his pistol out and aimed it at emricks head, Emrick who is scared as hell extended his left arm and covered his eyes with his right,"what the hell is that!"one of the pirates yelled,"Run!" Emrick opened his eyes to find molten metal coming out of his hand, enveloping the 3 guards with the leader. At the end of the day Emrick killed the leader and searched for his father only to find him in the medical tent, which was tiny, on a stretcher, dirty, wounded, and dehydrated. The last things he said were “ill always be with you son”, Emrick cried for a little then wiped his nose stood and walked out to the crowd of people “shall we go home?’ he asked walking towards the ships.
When he returned home at the age of 21 because of some unprecedented incidents emrick found nothing but bodies piled and burning, apparently some slavers came and when the people didn’t want to go they decided they would be better off dead. Emrick took a small box from what was left of his mothers hands that had his name inscribed on it, inside was a small necklace with the words “always with you” he stood and left with whatever people were alive yet, they set sail to find a new home, but Emrick had other plans. He lead the people he had rescued across the blue killing marines a more notable one being a navy ship as well as a good amount of other marines around the blue.

Personality: Emrick is a happy go lucky sort, normally you will find him smoking, playing a instrument or both, he feels like any moment could be your last so you should live it to the fullest and without limits, thus he is a very radical, dangerous and unrelenting opponent. His personal preference in weaponry would be daggers then his own logia abilities

He when needed can be very charming and convincing, a silver tongue if you will, he will do anything to keep girls happy and will usually go out of his way to help slaves. Normally he can be found playing an instrument, drinking, or talking with others, which makes him prone to making friends.

Ship:n/a

Ship Flag: n/a

Devil Fruit: Ekitai Koutetsu no mi
type: Logia
effect: The user is able to create and control molten metal of any sort.

Special Abilities: Musician (trumpet, violin, flute, )  good at wielding daggers. Emrick is strong and flexible although he doesn't go Melee all the time he can break a few jaws if he has to, he is also very good at free running. His physical strength is more centered around endurance, he can take a lot of pain, but dish a lot out as well.

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):
1:Metal Consumption- Emrick engulfs his opponent in molten metal burning them alive
2: Metal Barrage- Emrick shoots molten metal from his fingertips as if firing liquid bullets
3: Metal prison- Emrick creates a wall around his opponents of metal and slowly closes it in
4: Internal Design- Emrick only uses this technique on people that he truly wishes to kill, it allows his metal to go into a person and fry them from the inside out
5:Musical end- Emrick plays a melody while the metal from him slowly hardens around someone
6: Metal whip- Emrick extends a molten metal from his body into a long whip like weapon to use in combat
7: Heavy Metal- Emrick creates a giant metal weight overhead of an opponent to fall and crush them
8:Metal Armory- Emrick creates a weapon of his choice (except firearms)
9:Trap - Emricks metal forms spikes and harden, good for blocking off reinforcements or delaying someone
10:Brass Knuckles - Metal forms around Emricks hands into the shape of fists and hardens.
11:Metal Protection -  Molten Meltal coils around Emrick and forms the shape of either a chest guard, greaves or forearm guards.


Weapons/Items:
A pair of red handled daggers, the blade stands out of a silver lion head

Goals: Have fun, live a good life, defeat a Shichibukai


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PostSubject: Re: Emrick K. Locke   Emrick K. Locke Icon_minitimeSat Jul 13, 2013 5:47 pm

A few things needed to be edited/changed:
1. We need more personality, add at least another paragraph as that's too little.
2. When you say, in the history, a marine base, and that he took out 5 ships, what do you mean? Because if you mean a Marine Base with Navy Warships, then someone that just recently acquired an ability being able to do all that sounds a bit too much. That's more of a personal thing to note, if you edit the rest, I don't mind it as much, you will get approved. It just looks a bit weird.
3. You cannot become your element, it's not allowed.
4. It's always good to also include your char's physical prowess. Physical strength, speed, any combat skills, it's good to write em down, because otherwise how will others know what your character can do?
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PostSubject: Re: Emrick K. Locke   Emrick K. Locke Icon_minitimeTue Jul 16, 2013 9:26 am

All things I've pointed out are edited.
APPROVED. Have fun~
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PostSubject: Re: Emrick K. Locke   Emrick K. Locke Icon_minitimeThu Nov 14, 2013 8:03 pm

Changed his devil fruit need re approval
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PostSubject: Re: Emrick K. Locke   Emrick K. Locke Icon_minitimeFri Nov 15, 2013 3:39 am

Hmm, that's quite the upgrade~ APPROVED.
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