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Name: RB14 ''Tin''

Age: 3 years

Bounty: 0,000000

Species: Cyborg

Occupation: Scientist/doctor

Allegiance: Pirate

Home Village/Ocean: Grandline, Karakuri Island

Appearance: This is his normal form but when he is in attack form his body is covered in Rust coloured armor. He is the same size and shape. He is 250cm tall.

History:

Ship: Ruster

Ship Flag: A screw driver and a wrench instead of bones behind a skull.

Devil Fruit: Limited to only three devil fruit users per person
type: (only if you have a devil fruit)
effect: (only if you have a devil fruit)

Special Abilities: None yet.

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):

He dosent name them he ussualy just shoot with his laser or his gatling gun.

Weapons/Items: Rb14's arms

Goals: To find out who his creator is.

Dum dum done

*smooth jazz in the backgroung* Still waiting

History is much too short and doesn't really make sense, to me at least.
You should correct your spelling... Also, please link to the arms if they can be considered a weapon, if you haven't gotten the approved yet, please do so beforehand. Expand on personality as well.