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PostSubject: Deleted   Deleted Icon_minitimeFri Sep 30, 2011 8:45 am

Name: Nelson Heart

Age: 28

Bounty: 1,000 Beli

Species: Human

Occupation: Doctor/Writer

Allegiance: Pirate

Home Village/Ocean: Ohara

Appearance: Nelson is 5ft 9inches tall and weighs 9 stone he wears black leather shoes and black pinstripe trousers with a thin black belt. Nelson wears a light blue striped shirt with different shades of blue and has the sleeves rolled up to his elbows, on occasions he will wear a thin black tie. Nelson has his top 3 buttons undone all the time and has a well toned body beneath his shirt. Nelson has the word Lost tattooed across his fingers on his right hand. Nelson has hazel eyes and light freckles across his face and wavy long mousey brown hair which sits underneath a black bowler hat he wears with a thin white ribbon around it, he has a button nose which he hates and a faint brown moustache, sideburns and facial hair on his chin leading down his neck. Nelson has olive tanned skin except for a small white birthmark which is in the shape of a crescent on the back of his neck. Nelson’s eyes look evil most of the time despite how nice he actually is. Nelson has heavy dark bags under his eyes as he doesn’t sleep much. He carries around with him a cutlass in his hand in a scabbard. On the scabbard engraved in gold it says Lost in life.

History: Nelson grew up with one parent who was a writer and inherited his beautiful handwriting while his mother was a doctor and he took more of an interest in helping people. Nelson liked what both of his parents we’re doing for a living and wanted to do both but didn’t think it was possible. One night back at home after following his mum around he found out that when she discovered a new illness she would get his dad to document it. Nelson then realised he could do the same. Nelson grew up following in his mother’s footsteps studying medicine and learning from watching his mum. Nelson learnt much from his mother and spent his spare time writing down notes. Nelson spent his night writing down information about diseases and studying them so he could learn all about them and how treat them. Nelson graduated at the top of his class whilst studying medicine. Nelson left home at the age 17 looking for a place in need of his skills. Whilst Nelson set out seeking someone who needed his help he met many people and helped even more including a pirate captain who he discovered a new illness in. Nelson quickly wrote down everything about the illness he had discovered and reported the news to the captain. Nelson didn’t like the fact that he had found a disease he couldn’t cure and told the captain he would do everything within his power to help this captain survive including fight beside him. The only problem was Nelson didn’t know how to fight, the captain gave him a sword and taught him techniques he could use in battle and Nelson spent 3 years protecting this captain until he became too weak to live anymore and died. Nelson felt sad losing one of his patients and spent his last few moments with the captain, even though he was only with them for 3 years he had become like family to the captain due to his kindness and helpfulness. In the 3 years Nelson travelled with pirates he attacked many marines and managed to collect himself a small bounty for the murders of many marines and obstruction of justice and found a fruit whilst carrying some chests aboard the captain's ship as he had discovered the chest with the fruit the captain told him he should be the one to eat the fruit. The captain gave Nelson his treasured cutlass and said to him that he could see his swordsmanship had potential to become even greater and that he wanted him to carry with him the crew’s motto. “Lost in life” Nelson had felt one of the crew and had even got the word lost tattooed on his fingers. Nelson nodded then announced to the crew that the captain was dead. Nelson saw the crew we’re thinking of disbanding, Nelson tried to keep them together but their minds we’re made up and the crew disbanded, Nelson didn’t want the memories of the captain to disappear so decided to take the sword and motto to heart. Nelson set off into the world to discover, cure and document every illness.

Personality: Nelson is socially awkward and gets embarrassed easily; he finds it hard to start off a conversation between people. Nelson loves being involved in group of friends chatting and having fun together but he finds it hard to keep things lively. He doesn’t like being in charge as he doesn’t feel he is smart enough to lead the way but wants to. Nelson finds it easier to talk to himself rather than others and often will do so to avoid awkward situations.

Ship: N/A

Ship Flag: N/A

Devil Fruit: Trafalgar Law’s Devil Fruit
type: Paramecia
effect: The ability to move things around in a circle he creates.

Special Abilities:

Understanding-Nelson has a good understanding of the human body so he can help people in need to recover from injuries or illness.

Experienced swordsmanship-Due to being taught and training under a captain Nelson has unique swordsmanship skills.

Learned Techniques

Replace-Nelson replaces a person in danger with himself. Nelson can only do this as long as he is within 5 metres of the person in danger.

Slicing Drop-Nelson uses his sword to fire an air slicing projectile towards his enemies apart then, disconnects the body parts so they drop to the floor.

Blunt Swing-Nelson spins his cutlass around in its scabbard and uses it like a fan to attack people but not cut them.

Revolver-Using compressed air Nelson thrusts his sword forward at such a fast speed he launches 6 sharp air projectiles towards his enemy.

Head Bowling-Nelson fires a projectile air slash at his enemy then grabs his enemies head off and uses it as a bowling ball and throws it at his enemies.

Weapons/Items: Cutlass

Goals: Document and cure every illness in the world.


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PostSubject: Re: Deleted   Deleted Icon_minitimeFri Sep 30, 2011 2:04 pm

Some of your techniques could be used to cause someone to be automatically hit by their own, or their ally's attack, effectively functioning as a hitcall and an autododge all in one for a nice godmodding duo. Voodoo Pain is right out and Replace is going to need a lot more restrictions to prevent you from just replacing an ally with a random enemy for every attack they face.
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PostSubject: Re: Deleted   Deleted Icon_minitimeFri Sep 30, 2011 2:47 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Deleted   Deleted Icon_minitimeSat Oct 01, 2011 11:33 am

everything seems fine to me now, so APPROVED unless stated otherwise.
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