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Kurogane Ryusei

Kurogane Ryusei


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PostSubject: Dainichi Aizen   Dainichi Aizen Icon_minitimeSun Aug 21, 2011 3:39 am

Name: Dainichi Aizen

Age: 25

Bounty: 26,000 (As a high ranking Ex-Marine Dainichi has classified information and as such poses a great threat to the World Government.)

Species: Fishman: Porcupinefish

Occupation: Lifeguard/Doctor

Allegiance: Self, Captain Newport (only following him to make sure Newport pays back his debt)

Home Village/Ocean: Fishman Island

Appearance: Tall and skinny Dainichi is the opposite of what you'd expect a Porcupinefish Fishman to look like.His skin is a pale brownish yellow that looks like bronze in the sun. Dainichi's eyes are pitch black and his body is covered in poisonous spines. His outfit consists of a purple v neck shirt with a tailored lab coat over it. He wears black swim trunks and no shoes. He also has a bracer on each wrist and silky white hair. Due his enormous appetite he'll often break his chrome belt buckle. Has a tribal tattoo on his right shoulder of the Sun Pirates logo but keeps it hidden most of the time.

History: As a child, Dainichi was captured into slavery. Sold to a cruel old doctor who worked for the World Nobles he was turned into one of many guinea pigs for experimental medications and operations. After many years, the doctor saw potential in Dainichi and turned into a forced apprentice of sorts in conducting the very same operations on other slaves. All the torturous years of being forced to perform experimental surgeries on his fellow slaves, Dainichi saw his chance at escape with the help of Fisher Tiger. But after he escaped, Dainichi had no place among Fishmen for his sins against his people as a slave. Having nowhere else to go he eventually joined the Marines where he was the first and only ever Fishman. Despite facing prejudice he climbed up the ranks no doubt due to a combination of having no concept of self-preservation and inhuman endurance. In no time he became Rear Admiral of the Anti-Devil Fruit Squad. One day he was ordered to kill a group of escaped slave children and the pirates who freed them. Reliving the trauma of his past, he rebelled against orders and helped the pirates escape with the children. It was during this time with these pirates that Dainichi grew attached to these scallywags but keeps telling himself he's just there because they owe him and he's going to stay around until they return the favor.

Personality: Dainichi has a distant/loner personality developed from his years as a slave. He doesn't anger very easily only when he is disrespected or made to think he is small. He is not very easily saddened he can only be saddened really by hatred for Fishmen or the mention of the Tenryubito. He is very intelligence a fact evident at a very early age. He doesn't like to talk to others because he hasn't really taken a like to people.. Dainichi likes to be useful but not to be ordered around because he will rebel against it on purpose. He is also some what of a showoff and very proud in his combat ability.

Ship: name of ship

Ship Flag: describe

Special Abilities: Fishman: Enhanced Strength, Inflation, Poisonous Barbs, Change Color. Tough Skin, Slippery Skin

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):
1. Poison Barb: shoots a poisonous barb
2. Fist of the Sea King: Inflates fist to a giant size and punches the opponent poisoning the opponent also.
3. Blend In: Changes color to match surroundings
4. Poison Forest: Shoots multiple poisonous bards in the same direction or omnidirectionally.
5. Guardian of the Sea King: Inflates his body to grow to the size of a giant
6. Zoom: Uses his slippery skin to move at superhuman speed.

Weapons/Items: Sea Stone Gloves (yes this a weapon I did not submit but someone else did. You know better than I but I was under the impression that already approved weapons were open to anybody.)

Goals: To destroy the World Government


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PostSubject: Re: Dainichi Aizen   Dainichi Aizen Icon_minitimeSun Aug 21, 2011 3:51 am

Where to start, where to start.
1) You are using weapons you haven't submitted. Those need to be approved before they can be used.
2) Haki is not allowed on this site.
3) Appearance is far too short.
4) Personality is actually a required section
5) You cannot have Fishman Karate, Life Return, and Rokushiki at start.
6) I have never heard of this anti-DF squad.
7) You say he has life return but never mention specifically what he can do with it.
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PostSubject: Re: Dainichi Aizen   Dainichi Aizen Icon_minitimeSun Aug 21, 2011 4:00 am

You may actually want to trouble yourself to read the site's rules, as they are written and enforced guideline to help everyone have a pleasant RP experience, not as an aimless writing exercise on a rainy day. Please take the time to read the rules so you do not waste any more time attributing traits to your character that are not allowed and also so the staff does not waste time telling you things that you should have already know, had you bothered to read the rules and profile templates to begin with.
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Kurogane Ryusei

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PostSubject: Re: Dainichi Aizen   Dainichi Aizen Icon_minitimeSun Aug 21, 2011 7:45 pm

Name: Dainichi Aizen

Age: 25

Bounty: 26,000 (As a high ranking Ex-Marine Dainichi has classified information and as such poses a great threat to the World Government.)

Species: Fishman: Porcupinefish

Occupation: Lifeguard/Doctor

Allegiance: Self, Captain Newport (only following him to make sure Newport pays back his debt)

Home Village/Ocean: Fishman Island

Appearance: Tall and skinny Dainichi is the opposite of what you'd expect a Porcupinefish Fishman to look like.His skin is a pale brownish yellow that looks like bronze in the sun. Dainichi's eyes are pitch black and his body is covered in poisonous spines. His outfit consists of a purple v neck shirt with a tailored lab coat over it. He wears black swim trunks and no shoes. He also has a bracer on each wrist and silky white hair. Due his enormous appetite he'll often break his chrome belt buckle. Has a tribal tattoo on his right shoulder of the Sun Pirates logo but keeps it hidden most of the time.

History: As a child, Dainichi was captured into slavery. Sold to a cruel old doctor who worked for the World Nobles he was turned into one of many guinea pigs for experimental medications and operations. After many years, the doctor saw potential in Dainichi and turned into a forced apprentice of sorts in conducting the very same operations on other slaves. All the torturous years of being forced to perform experimental surgeries on his fellow slaves, Dainichi saw his chance at escape with the help of Fisher Tiger. But after he escaped, Dainichi had no place among Fishmen for his sins against his people as a slave. Having nowhere else to go he eventually joined the Marines where he was the first and only ever Fishman. Despite facing prejudice he climbed up the ranks no doubt due to a combination of having no concept of self-preservation and inhuman endurance. In no time he became Rear Admiral of the Anti-Devil Fruit Squad. One day he was ordered to kill a group of escaped slave children and the pirates who freed them. Reliving the trauma of his past, he rebelled against orders and helped the pirates escape with the children. It was during this time with these pirates that Dainichi grew attached to these scallywags but keeps telling himself he's just there because they owe him and he's going to stay around until they return the favor.

Personality: Dainichi has a distant/loner personality developed from his years as a slave. He doesn't anger very easily only when he is disrespected or made to think he is small. He is not very easily saddened he can only be saddened really by hatred for Fishmen or the mention of the Tenryubito. He is very intelligence a fact evident at a very early age. He doesn't like to talk to others because he hasn't really taken a like to people.. Dainichi likes to be useful but not to be ordered around because he will rebel against it on purpose. He is also some what of a showoff and very proud in his combat ability.

Ship: name of ship

Ship Flag: describe

Special Abilities: Fishman: Enhanced Strength, Inflation, Poisonous Barbs, Change Color. Tough Skin, Slippery Skin

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):
1. Poison Barb: shoots a poisonous barb
2. Fist of the Sea King: Inflates fist to a giant size and punches the opponent poisoning the opponent also.
3. Blend In: Changes color to match surroundings
4. Poison Forest: Shoots multiple poisonous bards in the same direction or omnidirectionally.
5. Guardian of the Sea King: Inflates his body to grow to the size of a giant
6. Zoom: Uses his slippery skin to move at superhuman speed.

Weapons/Items: Sea Stone Gloves (yes this a weapon I did not submit but someone else did an admin apparently. You know better than I but I was under the impression that already approved weapons were open to anybody.)

Goals: To destroy the World Government
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