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Schneedle



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PostSubject: Momen Momen no mi   Momen Momen no mi Icon_minitimeSun Sep 03, 2017 8:26 am

Basically, the momentum fruit.
Type: Paramecia (3 Paramecias? Wow...I need to change)
Operation: At face level it seems like a useless fruit to anyone. The user can stop all momentum of a body, but in turn receives all damage the momentum would have done anyway. This is where, I think things get interesting. The user can transform the pain he received into momentum back again, being able to make something, or the user's own body move with a lot of momentum (dependant on the amount of momentum he stopped before releasing it). This ability would be amazing if it were eaten by a masochist (a person who likes to be hurt, or pain). So, to sum it all, the user can steal momentum from an object, translate it into pain and transfer that pain into his body. He can then use the pain to give momentum to an object or self.


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PostSubject: Re: Momen Momen no mi   Momen Momen no mi Icon_minitimeThu Sep 07, 2017 10:45 am

Can I edit the post a tad to make it more understandable? Because at first I was confused Razz also, welcome to the site

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PostSubject: Re: Momen Momen no mi   Momen Momen no mi Icon_minitimeThu Sep 14, 2017 6:32 am

Thanks, is there a way I "allow" you to edit the post?... If it's verbal, I guess you could.
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PostSubject: Re: Momen Momen no mi   Momen Momen no mi Icon_minitimeThu Sep 14, 2017 12:52 pm

Merely verbal. Anyway, will check it soon enough.

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PostSubject: Re: Momen Momen no mi   Momen Momen no mi Icon_minitimeSun Sep 24, 2017 12:06 am

Could you change indirectly to directly?

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PostSubject: Re: Momen Momen no mi   Momen Momen no mi Icon_minitimeTue Nov 14, 2017 12:38 pm

Cobdogred wrote:
Could you change indirectly to directly?  
Your suggestion seems very rational. Indirectly makes the fruit a bit OP, yes. thanks.
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PostSubject: Re: Momen Momen no mi   Momen Momen no mi Icon_minitimeTue Nov 14, 2017 3:07 pm

I like it, I really do, but the paw paw fruit , kuma kuma no mi iirc, does essentially the same thing on a more powerful and limited scale. There is nothing wrong with your fruit and it is just different enough that I might approve it, but why use this when you could just use the stupid power of the paws?
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