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Jørgen Jørgensen

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PostSubject: renga-renga no mi   renga-renga no mi Icon_minitimeMon May 19, 2014 12:00 am

Name: Renga Renga No Mi (brick brick)

Capabilities:
Renga Renga No Mi is a logia type devil fruit that turns the user into a brick-man. The user is capable of producing and manipulating construction bricks as well as bring out constructs. This power can be used as a defensive or offensive power depending on the usage of the Renga Renga No Mi powers. The user can create his brick element and place it place it in front of an attack creating a barrier blocking the attack from damaging things behind the wall as well as a brick vortex. On the offensive side it can be used as a physical blow to opponents in many shapes and methods. Another usage of the technique is that the user can create structures as well as take them down which could reek havoc when used correctly. Much like any logia, the fruit's power becomes stronger when the user is somewhere with his respective element (in this case in towns with brick buildings).

Appearance: A red small fruit with a brick print on it. It is hard on top almost inedible though the bottom is soft and wet. The fruit has a horrid taste.  

Location: In a chasm on an unknown island in North Blue. It grows on an inverted tree and is near to impossible find except when high tide rolls in.


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PostSubject: Re: renga-renga no mi   renga-renga no mi Icon_minitimeMon May 19, 2014 2:30 am

Brick-like substance doesnt exist... Brick is made from other materials. Unless you're just talking about solid bricks, in which case alright. But you have to edit it. There is almost no detail in this fruit... what are the capabilities of the fruit? Explain a little bit more.

Also, your body doesnt change to brick hardness, we dont allow logia transformation in this part of the site. Explain, why is the user slow when he uses brick powers...? Remember anyone can use this fruit, not only you.
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Jørgen Jørgensen

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PostSubject: Re: renga-renga no mi   renga-renga no mi Icon_minitimeMon May 19, 2014 9:08 pm

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PostSubject: Re: renga-renga no mi   renga-renga no mi Icon_minitimeTue May 20, 2014 11:34 pm

You need to focus on one type of brick. Or at the most, construction bricks. Under no circumstances you will be allowed to create a water brick, water shot or anything with a devil fruit. It just doesnt make sense in the one piece world.

"Makes the user's attack become brick strong for physical attacks." I dont understand this statement. We're talking about a Logia fruit here. You can create bricks and attack with them, bring out constructs, shape them. Make the bricks fly around, whatever. Are you implying that your physical attacks are brick strong as well? Or are you saying that your constructs are only brick strong for physical attacks (which would mean that those that are energy based would find it softer?) Please explain.

Note on the last part as well: Your fruit does not allow you to create concrete! ONLY bricks. Concrete is a different material, and it would belong to a different logia fruit.
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PostSubject: Re: renga-renga no mi   renga-renga no mi Icon_minitimeTue May 20, 2014 11:54 pm

Yes I was implying that the physical attacks are brick strong?
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PostSubject: Re: renga-renga no mi   renga-renga no mi Icon_minitimeWed May 21, 2014 12:05 am

Unless your attacks are coated with bricks (which doesnt seem very practical to me) or that you're talking about physical damage caused by the bricks themselves, your body cannot perform physical attacks that are brick hard just because of the effect of this Logia Devil Fruit.
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PostSubject: Re: renga-renga no mi   renga-renga no mi Icon_minitimeWed May 21, 2014 12:34 am

Alright removed that part from the df.
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PostSubject: Re: renga-renga no mi   renga-renga no mi Icon_minitimeWed May 21, 2014 11:54 pm

Much better than before. Please take into account though, that just because of the presence of buildings you're not really stronger, on the contrary, if you'd manage to find something like... a construction site with a lot of bricks laying around or a destroyed town, you could combine your attacks with the pre-existing bricks.

Note that Enel was able to send his lightning through clouds because it was part of his Natural system. Crocodile could combine his sand with pre-existing sand in Alabasta. And Aokiji could freeze water and expand his ice as a result. It didn't make them "stronger" though, it only extended the reach of their fruit.

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