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PostSubject: Ghost (Poem)   Ghost (Poem) Icon_minitimeFri Sep 13, 2013 12:53 pm

There is nothing left,
nothing to hold on to,
not a place to call home,
nor a person to call friend.

Will you hand me that phone?
there is an important call I must make,
I will call death and ask for forgiveness,
eternity is such a long way…

So much time, so much to do,
lies, lies, lies, lies,
eternity is a curse,
a beautiful rose full of thorns,
it promises what you desire the most,
it gives you your worst nightmare.

Why did I accept?
Why did I have to be so… so… so mundane?
Those desires weren't needed,
it wasn't a necessity…

Yet here I am,
an immortal being,
cursed to live for eternity,
watching loved ones fade away into time,
history being made and repeated…

Love being lost.
Lost forever.
Scared of going through that again,
I become a ghost.

There is nothing left,
nothing left at all.
Not a thing left to
prove that I ever was alive.
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PostSubject: Re: Ghost (Poem)   Ghost (Poem) Icon_minitimeSat Sep 14, 2013 12:38 pm

Well, it was a bit too gloomy for my taste. Not that it was bad. Do you write alot??
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PostSubject: Re: Ghost (Poem)   Ghost (Poem) Icon_minitimeWed Sep 18, 2013 7:43 pm

Yep, I do :3 You?
And yeah it was gloomy... sorry XD
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PostSubject: Re: Ghost (Poem)   Ghost (Poem) Icon_minitimeWed Sep 18, 2013 9:40 pm

Sorry Lost, but distraction time:

If that picture is of you, you are one of the cutest people I have ever seen.


Now back on topic... Nice poetry. I honestly prefer the gloom, doom, and malice in my poetry. I could do an AP rhetoric analysis of your poetry, or I could turn down the education for a good few minutes and congratulate you for good work. I choose the second.
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PostSubject: Re: Ghost (Poem)   Ghost (Poem) Icon_minitimeThu Sep 19, 2013 11:41 am

Not really, tho I'd like to actually do such a thing in my spare time, it's just that I don't get the spare time and calmness I need xD
And no need to, it was gloomy, but it was a good work.
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PostSubject: Re: Ghost (Poem)   Ghost (Poem) Icon_minitimeSat Sep 21, 2013 11:32 am

Aidoneus: Thanks Aidoneus! Smile and yea... that's me o3o

Shad0w: Hmm, if you ever do write a poem, I would love to read it Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Ghost (Poem)   Ghost (Poem) Icon_minitimeSun Sep 22, 2013 3:28 pm

Will gladly let you know if/when I do.
On a side note, agreein with Aido-chan's "distraction time" comment. xD
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PostSubject: Re: Ghost (Poem)   Ghost (Poem) Icon_minitimeSun Sep 22, 2013 8:32 pm

Yay, can't wait.

And lol... thanks x//u//x
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