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Name: Ren Saburo "Third Lotus"

Age: 17

Bounty: 3,000

Species: Human

Occupation: Sniperman

Allegiance: None at the Moment

Home Village/Ocean: North Blue

Appearance: [img][/img]

History: Ren was born in a large village on the North Blue. Ren was abandoned by his parents at the age of just 1 years old. As Ren started to grow older many people hated him and he hated them, Ren didn't have a place to call home nor people to call parents. Ren was raised by the hatred in his heart, no-body knew the reason why Ren's parents had abandoned him nor did he. As years went by Ren had nothing for entertainment the only thing that would make him smile was killing other people. He love to sit on buildings and snipe as many people he could find down he found it some what entertaining to do. Ren at the age of 10 decided he should go look for his so called "parents" and kill them for what they did to them. While Ren was setting up a boat a man came charging towards him holding up a knife. As the man brought down the Knife Ren quickly moved out the way and drew his gun he then shot the man on his chest. The man coughed out a lot of blood and fell to the ground as he fell he said "Ren Saburo.... your father...." the word father had attracted Ren's attention, he then approached the man and asked "My father, what about him?" the man chuckled a little and said "He had sent me.... to kill.... you...." after those words the man passed away. Ren after hearing this clenched his chest and whispered "So father.... you are after my life....." He then quickly got on the boat and set sail in search of his parents.

While he set sail as a pirate he visited many lands and took down many enemys, he also found special bullets.
he trained with these "special" bullet for numerous years until he felt that he was read to use it for murder. The more he progressed through the sea the more he wanted to meet up with his so called "parents", one day while Ren was reloading his guns a pack of pirates surrounded him. He just sighed and held out both of his guns and began to shoot at them while spinning soon later he was done with them however he also encountered marines who were after the pirates he took them down with ease and raised his bounty.

Personality: Ren is a cold-hearted boy who cares only for himself. Ren dose not know the meaning of "Love" nor "Family" for he didn't get them when he was young. Ren always prefers to fight and always catches and opportunity to shed some blood, Ren when sniping tends to cover his right eye for a better view. It has also been said that Ren has never been seen with a smile on his face however Ren only laughs when he has killed someone however the laugh is only a slight chuckle.

Ship: Heartless Cruiser

Ship Flag: A skull which has a sad expression and two snipers behind it.


Special Abilities:
Perfect Accuracy: Ren while sniping, has great accuracy

Fast reflexes: Ren draws his guns at a fast pace

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-15):

Bullet Tornado: Shoots while spinning

Bullet's Feast: Lots of bullets come charging towards the enemy (Pistol)

Weapons/Items: Sniper and 2 Pistols, Sinco Balas [5 Bullets]

Goals: To kill his Parents.

Straw, please add some more detail to your history. At least two 4-5 line paragraphs are required for History section, and I'm sure you could extend your personality a bit as well. Just to give your characters more quality; I hope you understand.

Also be careful about your Certain Death technique, remember you can not kill people's charactes without their permissions. Also, remember that your trigger speed can't be to high when the character has just started, so dont go around saying you shot 20 bullets in one second or something like that hahaa, you know what I mean.

EDITED

Alright, now it's better.

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