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PostSubject: Seff “Patches” Mistletoe   Seff “Patches” Mistletoe Icon_minitimeSun Aug 21, 2011 12:54 pm

Name: Seff “Patches” Mistletoe

Age: 21

1st Bounty: 20,000

Species: Human

Occupation: Saboteur, Fighter, Assassin

Allegiance: Dark Isle Assassins

Home Village/Ocean: South Blue

Appearance: Seff has long shaggy brown hair at the back it curls up at the bottom of his neck and on the sides it curls up half way down the ears and at the front it curls up just above the eyes. Seff has hazel eyes and freckles. He wears a plain white dress shirt, the top 3 buttons are undone, black ¾ cargo shorts and he is bare foot. Seff has a horn full of alcohol hanging by sling which hangs from his shoulder and a necklace with a wolf’s tooth on it which hangs from around his neck. Seff has a claw mark on the back of his left shoulder from Blair, and a very toned body with an olive skin tone apart from a white scar down the side of his neck from fight with his brother. He is muscular but when covered up his muscles can't be seen very well. Seff stands at 5ft 7 and weighs 9 stone

History:
Seff grew up in the South blue with his older brother to look up to they both lived with their parents and pet wolf Blair, their father had managed to tame. Seff and his older brother Tim spent their time playing with Blair and looking after him instead of helping at home with the housework. They all formed a very close bond. They spent time up in the mountains playing together and play fighting Seff and Tim would fight each other to prove they were the tougher of the two of them. Tim always won, but in the winter season the last time Seff and Tim fought they were attacked by a pack of wolves. Tim was injured and nearly killed. Blair attacked the pack and was heavily injured. As Seff watched the wolf pack attack Blair, he tried to pull the other wolves off of him to find Blair on the floor covered in blood weeping. Seff carried Tim and Blair home so he could make sure they would survive. After a few hours of waiting he discovered Tim had died from the injuries but Blair had survived with very serious injuries. Seff went to spend time with Blair as Tim was dead and felt he should look after Blair. When Seff approached Blair, Blair woke up and saw Seff and ran off to finish the fight with the wolves. Seff and his father followed him. When they got there Seff saw Blair and tried to save him but his dad stopped him. When Seff asked him why he wouldn’t help Blair his dad told him, he has the spirit of a pirate; he’ll keep on fighting and fighting until victory is his or he dies, he just too proud to let any injuries stop him from living up to his potential. Seff understood and remained quiet as he watched Blair fight to victory. Once a bloody near death Blair limped away from the corpses of the wolves which killed Seff’s brother and nearly his only other best friend Seff held him tight and wept tears as Blair died from exhaustion. Seff grew up with the knowledge that he should always fight for what he wants and never give up no matter what. Seff wanted to honour Blair for his bravery and carry on his spirit. 3 years after the funerals, Seff’s father was captured by the Marines for prolonging the previous king of the pirate’s life as he stopped off on this island and Seff’s father gave him some medicine. As the marines surrounded the house and took his father away Seff began swinging his fist and fighting to save his father with the spirit of a pirate. Seff managed to take down 32 marines and permanently wound a Marine Capitan who was conducting the arrest, before knocked unconscious. When he awoke his father was gone, a few days later Seff was informed about his father being executed. Seff thought the idea of being deemed a criminal for helping a pirate was ridiculous and didn't agree, and with that he decided that he would leave the island and cause the authorities trouble for his loss. As Seff was getting ready to leave the citizens of the small town thanked him for trying to get rid of the marines as his dad just did a good deed, in thanks they convinced the shipwrights of the town to give him a ship they’d already constructed. Seff happily took it and sailed away.

Personality: Seff is happy go lucky but not very clever he enjoys destruction and a good fight. When Seff meets other pirates he usually starts a little fight with them leading up to the most powerful attack to see how powerful they are then will offer them the chance to form an alliance if they are powerful enough to be considered a threat. If the request is declined then Seff will hold no grudges, he’ll simply walk away, unless attacked. People are often reluctant to speak to him due to his reckless nature but once people get to know him they enjoy his company. Seff enjoys climbing and is fairly quirky and can often be found sitting or hanging in awkward places on the ship. Like his father Seff enjoys drinking and having social drinks and usually drinks when happy and among friends or depressed for a loss or failure, but he always cheers up after he's undergone an intense training session to make himself stronger. Seff is very creative when it comes to physical things.

Ship: Once Bitten

Ship Flag: Black skull with two revolvers crossing below.

Special Abilities:

Booze burn-Seff fills his mouth with booze then pulls out a lighter lights it and blows booze through it so it’s like a flame thrower.

Cerberus howl- Seff howls so loud it hurts everyone’s ears in the area.

Scorch bite-Seff sets fire to the booze in his mouth and bites the enemy as hard as he can.

Douse- Seff smashes his horn of booze over enemy and lights them up.

Fire retardant-Due to Seff using fire so much in his attacks his body has build up a resistance to it so fire doesn't affect him as much as others.

Learned Techniques:

Phoenix drop-When Seff is in the air and falling he covers his body in booze and lights himself on fire as he drops into his victim.

Bury the bone-Seff digs like a dog temporarily blinding his enemy and kicking them multiple times at an incredibly fast rate.

Soru-Seff can move at extremely high speed.

Husky pull-Seff sits like a dog and screams focuses his strength which gives him
incredible strength like that of 100 huskies and enhanced speed.

Cannonball-Seff charges at a person and curls up into a ball.

Pounce-Seff jumps at any object and can jump directly off of it into another one and continue doing it he can even use it on enemies by jumping from enemy to enemy, but the distance he can jump is limited.

Weapons/Items: A lighter and himself.

Goals: Collect a crew of friends to replace the loss of brother Tim, Blair and Father and cause trouble for the authorities in retaliation for the death of his father. Once this goal is complete to become a world renowned pirate and make powerful allies.


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PostSubject: Re: Seff “Patches” Mistletoe   Seff “Patches” Mistletoe Icon_minitimeSun Aug 21, 2011 4:32 pm

Okay....
1.) Appearance needs to be improved upon, you could start by writing complete sentences and go from there...
2.) History is much too short, not to mention it doesn't really make much sense in parts.
3.) Personality, while acceptable, has no foundation at all. For example, why does he like dogs again? Wasn't his father killed by them? Why did he decide to stop drinking?
4.) I've read the history twice, but I don't see where the corrupt marine comes in. If he is the leader of the wolf pack, I don't see his motiv in attacking the village, why he would lead a wolfpack, or why he would be a marine.
5.) Why exactly is this guy a pirate? I mean, you don't even mention anything related to the sea or pirates in the history.
6.) While I do not really consider a bone a weapon, could you please still get it approved as one?
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PostSubject: Re: Seff “Patches” Mistletoe   Seff “Patches” Mistletoe Icon_minitimeSun Aug 21, 2011 7:12 pm

I've edited it
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PostSubject: Re: Seff “Patches” Mistletoe   Seff “Patches” Mistletoe Icon_minitimeMon Aug 22, 2011 4:37 am

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PostSubject: Re: Seff “Patches” Mistletoe   Seff “Patches” Mistletoe Icon_minitimeMon Aug 22, 2011 6:37 am

...Approved...
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