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Rodoku
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PostSubject: Ode to TheLostOne10 (Joyce)   Ode to TheLostOne10 (Joyce) Icon_minitimeMon Jul 04, 2011 10:11 pm

Ode To Joyce.

Joy you bring, to the poor and the rich,
but I have to to tell you, that you are a bitch.
But dont misunderstand me, I mean the female dog
because sometimes I think you're too pissed off by Frog.

I know that it's easy for you to get lost,
and forget things, your name at the most.
And I want you to know, Crow is MY brother, not yours Joyce!
So go and look for someone, like Thor, to take as a choice.

You draw very good, I have to admit,
but I really hope you trip with your feet,
and flying through the air, you fall in a pit.
Youre a Joyce Suee, and you know I mean it!

you just told me that you are intelligent,
but I think that "retarded" is the word that you meant.
Shells and shells of built up personality
have blocked up your comprehension ability.

Good in algebra, but bad in geometry?
You really hope it was like trigonometry,
but you dont understand that it is just yourself
that forgot your brain at home in a shelf.

And now with this words I may have to end,
but making a second Ode is what I would tend,
now its time for me to say good-bye
I hope that you have a stroke and die.

Rodoku97.


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PostSubject: Re: Ode to TheLostOne10 (Joyce)   Ode to TheLostOne10 (Joyce) Icon_minitimeTue Jul 05, 2011 5:00 am

the 4th part isn't perfect but the rest is awesome! XD
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PostSubject: Re: Ode to TheLostOne10 (Joyce)   Ode to TheLostOne10 (Joyce) Icon_minitimeTue Jul 05, 2011 9:40 am

nice Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Ode to TheLostOne10 (Joyce)   Ode to TheLostOne10 (Joyce) Icon_minitimeTue Jul 05, 2011 11:26 am

Thanks guys lol
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PostSubject: Re: Ode to TheLostOne10 (Joyce)   Ode to TheLostOne10 (Joyce) Icon_minitimeSat Jul 30, 2011 6:29 am

should have called it ode to joy Razz
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