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PostSubject: William Stargazer    William Stargazer  Icon_minitimeThu Apr 21, 2011 4:32 pm

Name: William Stargazer

Age: 17

Bounty: 10,000

Species: Human

Occupation:sniper, weapon smith (guns)

Allegiance:none

Home Village/Ocean: west blue

Appearance: normal clothing
Spoiler:

History::William was born into a family of 3 making it four after .while he went to first school he wasn't good at anything in school but he could make things. he was good at engineer/ craftsman.when he got to middle school he started to train in marksmanship at the end of middle school he nearly mastered marksmanship he could get a bullseye at fifty feat with a pistol. when he got into high school when he was out he spent too long out . when he was out his family got killed by a gang they stole all the money but they couldnt get through the vault holding the the families most valued possessions. when he got home he found his dead family he blamed the gang who threatened his family to kill them or let them have everything. he then searched the house for guns he found a shotgun and a pistol in the vault in the wall of the third floor he then took the rest of the valuable items in the vault and left. he was going to get his vengence. he then found the main part of the gang and killed them all in cold blood but the leaders were still left he need them dead if he was going to let his family rest in peace. he went to the shooting range and took a machine gun he left the city and looked for the leaders of the gang when he found one he slaughtered all his gaurd with his pistols and when he found the leader and hit rammed the shotgun into the leaders face and fired it into his face. the blood splattered around the room and his face his heart was filled with joy at the site of blood. he left the town for the next in command he found he was hiding in a city in the east blue he left the west blue for the east blue. he went through hell but he made it to the east blue. he hunted the man down but with no luck he went to the store and bought sniper rifle he then bought a home and modified bullets he looked for the commander more and more he then found his hiding spot he waited for three days for the chance to kill the man he fired the sniper round which was a explosive round which left nothing of the man except a few spatters. for the next year he planned his moves made newer and better bullets. he made it his goal to kill the final leader of the gang .

Personality:William is going to avenge his family if he has to kill everyone and he will in cold blood if he is made to. he also wants to have the best weapons he can that is why he makes his own ammo to make his weapons be better than any other of its kind. He will kill or maim anyone who disrespects the dead. people who only knew him for a short time would think he was a gun nut who only want was to kill but if you get to know him he is very caring and will protect those he cares about and make sure they don't die like his family did when he didn't protect them. His favourite food is sour food any kind as long as it is sour and his favourite drink is something sour. He will not attack anyone who he cares about even if they mean to kill he will not attack them.

Ship:Frigate

Ship Flag: N/A

Devil Fruit:N/A

Special Abilities:
Eagle eye: long sight and able to have perfect accuracy.
quick reload: able to switch ammo or reload weapons in seconds

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):
bullet barrage:fires his machine gun until runs out of ammo then fires all his pistols until they also are out of ammo
pistol storm: spins around firing his pistols with perfect precision hitting most of the targets aimed for.
covering fire: He fire his machine gun making a wall of bullets to stop enemies.
doom HEADSHOT: Fires his sniper rifle to kill or maim which always hits (final move- only on npcs)
Melee fire:uses his pistols and fires them as well as he can in range in Melee
shotgun hurricane: uses his shot gun and back flips firing his shotgun in all directions as he flips


Weapons/Items:
Sniper rifle
machine gun
dual pistols
shotgun
custom ammunition

Sniper rifle
Name:explosive
Effect:after impact the bullet explodes within the target
Name:Tiger fang
Effect:The sniper rifle round has much more penetration
Name:tracker round
Effect:the round has a special electronic chip in it which can be used to track a fleeing target.

Machine gun
Name:suppressing fire
Effect:the bullets are shaped like caltrops at the back when it fired into the ground it can be used to try and slow an opponent.

shot gun:
Name: Swarm of hornets
Effect: Each pellet in the shotgun shell is covered in a either of two toxins
Burning sting: the toxin effects the target if the pellet gets to the blood stream after 10 minutes(4 posts) the poison spread around the target the amount of pain caused is dependant on the amount of pellets hit.
stopping power: the toxin effects the target if the pellet get lodged into the muscle after 10 minutes (4 posts) the muscle is paralysed for 1 hour(8 posts) it will effect for longer if more bullet hit

Name: dragons breath
Effect: each shotgun pellet is on fire. and the shell is designed to make all the bullets travel more tightly packed than a normal shell which make the shot look like a small fire ball.

Name: Smoky storm
Effect:each pellet is on fire which makes a smog and the shell space is half used for a special powder to make a smokescreen this shell is not for offence

twin pistols:
Name:ice shroud
Effect:the bullet is filled about 1 drop of liquid nitrogen which make the bullet very cold which will stick to any moist surface including inside bodies and skin. also the round emits a small white smoke of air when fired enough rounds makes a very cold shroud
Name: tears of sorrow
Effect: each bullet is made of sharpened clear crystal which makes them do more damage per hit


Goals: Vengance


Last edited by valawsedit on Sun Jun 19, 2011 3:23 am; edited 4 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: William Stargazer    William Stargazer  Icon_minitimeFri Apr 22, 2011 3:54 am

The pictures clearly show different persons, and both of them are from another series. Replace them. And make clear which one he looks like.

Also, the history..... It doesn't make sense.... First, his school career. He couldn't go to preschool... because he couldn't tie his shoelaces? He was gone in highschool? Where to? Was his highschool so far away that the pirates could attack the village without being noticed by him? If they attacked, why did that gang live? Wouldn't he whole village have been destroyed? And if it was, then it's ridiculous to think the gang did it alone. Also, wouldn't his family have been robbed as well? There shouldn't be any money left.
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PostSubject: Re: William Stargazer    William Stargazer  Icon_minitimeFri Apr 22, 2011 9:43 am

changed and done
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PostSubject: Re: William Stargazer    William Stargazer  Icon_minitimeFri Apr 22, 2011 9:53 am

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