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PostSubject: The Flying Steel - Retired    flying - The Flying Steel - Retired  Icon_minitimeTue Mar 01, 2011 2:31 am

Name:Draken Mizuki

Age:21

Bounty: 3,500,000

Species: Human

Occupation: Bounty Hunter, Doctor, Minor Navigator

Allegiance:Spotted Pirates

Home Village/Ocean: Steel Village, East Blue

Appearance:
Spoiler:

History: Draken was born to a warrior village in east blue, that trained their young almost from birth. They were trained to fight against the World Government, and protect the ancient texts that were entrusted to them. At an early age Draken shown a affinity for ninja and stealth like weapons. This made him the target of the Black Steel section of the Steel Village, however they never were able to get their hands on him. Draken's parents were loyal to the Steel and were higher ranking member. They loved to show this fact by flaunting their power and taunting Derge.

Draken was taken from his parents at the age of five like all young Steel, he was trained for a grueling 10 years. His parents had hired the caretaker to make the young man the strongest the Steel has ever seen. Their reasoning was to gain the ultimate hierarchy of the Steel, the elder position. Draken trained for 10 years, getting stronger and stronger. The day Draken graduated he was considered to be one of the strongest to have ever come from a caretakers training. That lasted for a good two years before one man came out, Derge Namikaze and it happened again a year later when Iken Namikaze came back.

Enraged by this, Draken was sent away to train on a deserted forest island. Three years later Draken came back to find his village completely destroyed. There was nothing left of the Steel Village his parents, not that long ago planned to take over.

Personality: Draken is very conceded and thinks he is better than almost everyone. This steams from his noble like parents acting the same way. However despite being an obnoxious ass he does care about those who he considers worthy or who he's gotten used to. He is a terrible loser that will try a sneak attack or do anything to win.

Ship: name of ship

Ship Flag: describe

Devil Fruit: Limited to only three devil fruit users per person
type: (only if you have a devil fruit)
effect: (only if you have a devil fruit)


Special Abilities: Super speed (soru level) and strength (Sakura or Garp level).

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25): Namikaze Style Techniques, Flash (User moves at soru speed), Winged Flash (User is able to walk on air or water particles), Sword Techniques, Hand to hand combat, Blade Cannon (Launches a air blade while using a sword or chopping attack)

Weapons/Items: Katana, pistol, two daggers, long rifle, spiked knuckles

Goals:Find and defeat Iken and Derge. Find out who destroyed the Steel Village and kill them.


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PostSubject: Re: The Flying Steel - Retired    flying - The Flying Steel - Retired  Icon_minitimeTue Mar 01, 2011 7:51 pm

Done and ready to be checked!
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PostSubject: Re: The Flying Steel - Retired    flying - The Flying Steel - Retired  Icon_minitimeTue Mar 01, 2011 8:39 pm

That guy...I don't know his name but he's from Shugo Chara. It's a canon character picture appearance and we don't allow that....
Super Speed and Strength should be elaborated on a bit or at least tell us the limits he has.
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PostSubject: Re: The Flying Steel - Retired    flying - The Flying Steel - Retired  Icon_minitimeTue Mar 01, 2011 8:56 pm

Fixed
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PostSubject: Re: The Flying Steel - Retired    flying - The Flying Steel - Retired  Icon_minitimeWed Mar 02, 2011 9:47 pm

Alright, that's pretty good.

I like him. Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: The Flying Steel - Retired    flying - The Flying Steel - Retired  Icon_minitimeTue Sep 06, 2011 1:47 am

I'm retiring this character.
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