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samowise



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PostSubject: Eronk Gridush"the Ocean nightmare"   Eronk Gridush"the Ocean nightmare" Icon_minitimeSat Nov 06, 2010 4:46 pm

Name: Eronk Gridush"the Ocean nightmare"

Age:25

Bounty: 100,000,000

Species: Fishman

Occupation: Navigator

Allegiance: enemy of the World government
Home Village/Ocean: Fishman island(grandline)


Appearance: Eronk got long black hair, blue skin, a long pointed nose, and powerful sharp teeth. He also got blue eyes, and he is considered to be charming for most of his race. Ernok's also got a well built muscular body because of his intensive training he had in using fishman Karate. Ernok also always wears a long jacket that he always leaves open with nothing under making the Tattoo on his chest pretty much obvious along with his abs. Ernok is also considered to be tall even for his race. One of the other things that distinguishe Ernok is the huge scar he got on his right cheek. Overall Ernok's appearance makes him a unique fishman.

History: Eronk was born twenty five years ago on fishman island beneath the depth of the ocean. He was born to powerful parents who were known for their fighting skills among the other fishmen. The family was pretty much respected, and most of the other fishmen and mermaids felt comfortable when the Gridush family was around. However all of that changed on one dark night when a group of marines were sent to capture some fishmen for the auction house in Shapondy Archipelago. They were sent on this special and secret mission for of course the world nobles So that they would have some cool fishmen and mermaids for the next auction.

The marines attacked with three ship that was full of corrupted and evil marines. The three ships had two powerful rear admirals, and a well known vice admiral who thirsted for blood. The attack on the fishmen island was savage, and even though everyone who was attacked fought well including Ernok (who was now eleven years old) and his parents...it all ended up badly. Ernok however proved how strong he was killed a marine rear admiral, and some of the other lower marines that were on the ship. However at the end he was captured after the marines saw his potential, and also his parents were murdered brutally since the marines failed to capture them. Also on that day the marines caught a few more fishmen, and two mermaids. After that, the cowardice marines escaped back to the surface with Ernok and the other captives as they placed all of them in cages, and got them prepared for the next auction.

However the young fishman did not loose hope yet. He was still not going to yield and that is why he started to raise the morales of his fellow slaves telling them that everything was going to be alright, and that as long as they fought as one everything was going to be alright. After a few weeks the grand auction started, and well seeing that the auction had a lot of rare creatures in it a lot of the world nobles were present and also the marines had a lot of their ships surrounding the island. Of course a lot of powerful rear admirals, and vice admirals were present seeing that they had to make sure that everything was going to go smooth today.

But well things did not go smooth especially after Ernok with some help was able to free all of the prisoners and launched an attack on everyone who was gathered for the auction. The young fishman killed a lot of guards and marines who were inside the auction house, but well the lives of those marines was nothing compared to the life of one of the world nobles that Ernok took out while he was making his way out of the auction house. After the world noble was dead Ernok knew well that he had to make it out of Shapondy before one of the powerful admirals showed up and made the whole escape plan impossible for them. Ernok fought bravely that day as he killed the vice admiral who murder the vice admiral who killed his parents. He also killed two rear admirals along with a huge number of low marines and sank a few marine ships with the help of the other slaves. Of course after that he jumped into the ocean and started to swim back to his beloved home. His allies who were weirdly humans stole some ships from pirates and marines and sailed away right before the admiral came to the village which was now engulfed in flames and chaos.

Ernok went back to his home and was greeted well by his fellow fishmen. He also went to live in well hidden hideout on his village encase the marines decided to capture him. After all, he knew well that the marines were going to put a pretty high bounty on his head after all chaos he did on shapondy archpelong. Ernok then spent most his years training, and improving his skills in navigating. After all, he was a pretty skilled navigator by instinct since the day he was born. However Ernok's fight was not done yet with the pathetic world government. From time to time Ernok used to swim up back to Shapondy to free some slaves, and kill marines. He was always good that seeing that he always freed some slaves and caused some damage to the marines before he was captured. He also made sure that he used to strike, and escape fast before he got captured."hit and run" Was defintly the tactic he used a lot. Also on one of his raids in Shapondy he was forced to kill the son of the world noble he killed a few years ago seeing that the young teenage boy tried to attack avenge his father by killing Ernok. After murdering the second world noble Ernok's bounty increased a lot once again. He was now a well known threat and enemy for the World government and the world nobles...also the marines started to call him "The ocean nightmare" for the fact the he always used to come from the depth of the ocean and strike especially during night time.

More years have passed now and finally Ernok decided to look for a powerful crew that would help him in defeating the WG once and for all.

Personality: Ernok is cruel, savage, and is usually heartless when he dealing with his enemies or people he hates. Also due to his looks, and that heartless nature of his a lot of people started to believe that he was evil, and psychopath. However behind all of that Ernok had a kind, and warm side that usually came out when he was interacting with slaves or other people who were abused badly by the world government. Ernok is also a born leader with a strong personality, and stubborn head making him a fearful and powerful figure.

Ship: non

Ship Flag: none.

Devil Fruit: does not have a devil fruit.
type: (only if you have a devil fruit)
effect: (only if you have a devil fruit)

Special Abilities: A powerful martial artist and fishman karate user, a good navigator, he got a lot of influence in the sea kingdom(Which means he can speak to sea animals and give orders to them), a born leader, and he also knows a little about repairing ships. He also got superhuman strength, and speed especially under water.

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25): Hyakumaigawara Seiken (百枚瓦正拳 Hundred Tile True Punch?): A hard punch that can send an opponent flying.

Wantō Giri (腕刀斬り Arm Blade Slash?): Eronk slams his arm-fin into the back of his opponent's neck.

Kaisoku: Harakudashigeri (海速 腹下し蹴り Sea-Speed Stomach Drop Kick?): An underwater attack, Eronk darts forward and uses that momentum to deliver a savage side kick to the opponent's stomach.

Kachiage Haisoku (カチ上げ背足 Rising Thrust-Kick?): Done underwater, an inner-sole kick to the chin of Eronk's opponent.

Karakusagawara Seiken (唐草瓦正拳 Arabesque Tile True Punch?): Eronk punches at a fair distance from the intended target(s), so instead of the fist connecting, it releases a shock wave that sends them flying.

Gyojin Jūjutsu: Mizugokoro (魚人柔術水心 Fishman Way of Yielding: Water Heart?): An underwater technique that Ernok initiates by first performing a bowl-shaped gesture with his webbed hands (one hand over the other) while underwater right before giving the water itself around him a mighty yank; this allows Ernok to physically grab and redirect currents as if he were manipulating cloth.

Kairyū Ipponzeoi (海流一本背負い Sea Current Lifter?): An underwater technique performed after Mizugokoro. Ernok heaves the current upward, where it erupts from the ocean surface as a towering stream of water.

Yarinami (槍波 Spear Wave?): A technique used on a body of water's surface. Ernok heaves a spear-shaped burst of water with enough force to punch a hole in solid structures.

Appakushi Chokka Kōro (圧迫死直下航路 Death by Pressure Plunge?): Done underwater, Ernok grabs his opponent then swims extremely fast to the ocean floor where the pressure of the ocean wreaks havoc on the opponent's body.

Jōdan Bakushō (上段爆掌 High-Rank Exploding Palm?): Done underwater, this is an open-palm attack to the chin of Ernok's opponent.

Weapons/Items: energy pills, shurikens,breath dial,reject dial,Jet dial,Brass knuckles, seastone cuffs, and reinforced sandals.
Goals: Destroy the World government, and give freedom to every living being.


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PostSubject: Re: Eronk Gridush"the Ocean nightmare"   Eronk Gridush"the Ocean nightmare" Icon_minitimeSat Nov 06, 2010 4:59 pm

Wow, overpowered much? well, not my problem, though I frown upon you using one of Jimbies techniques.
the real problem: dude, that's Arlong. You can't just take Arlong without a tatoo as the appearance. Change it, and I'll approve it.
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PostSubject: Re: Eronk Gridush"the Ocean nightmare"   Eronk Gridush"the Ocean nightmare" Icon_minitimeSat Nov 06, 2010 5:09 pm

I removed the picture and wrote his physical description instead. Also about the techniques I will be adding more original techniques as I develop him.
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PostSubject: Re: Eronk Gridush"the Ocean nightmare"   Eronk Gridush"the Ocean nightmare" Icon_minitimeSat Nov 06, 2010 5:18 pm

Please, can you make the appearance a little longer than, like, two sentences?
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PostSubject: Re: Eronk Gridush"the Ocean nightmare"   Eronk Gridush"the Ocean nightmare" Icon_minitimeSat Nov 06, 2010 5:26 pm

Done.
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PostSubject: Re: Eronk Gridush"the Ocean nightmare"   Eronk Gridush"the Ocean nightmare" Icon_minitimeSat Nov 06, 2010 5:35 pm

Fine, APPROVED, unless someone else says it's not.
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PostSubject: Re: Eronk Gridush"the Ocean nightmare"   Eronk Gridush"the Ocean nightmare" Icon_minitimeSun Nov 07, 2010 12:00 am

i am just asking you to lower your bounty, i get your history, but the bounty is still to high, make it 100,000,000
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Done.
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