Valawxedit

Name:valawxedit

Age:14

Bounty:300,000

Species:Human

Allegiance:dont care

Home Village/Ocean:south blue

Appearance:average height about 5'2", skinny medium build, red top and hood bottom ruined, belts on the arms and stitching on the hood ,purple seramic mask or beige floral design mask when not wearing mask blue eyes long black hair with red streaks, metal gauntlets, leg plates and boots

History:he lived on a island just of coast of karate island in lab all he did was experiment with gunpowder and oil. but a year after he moved there his parent died at sea. he inherited the lab and some money to keep him going. but three years later pirates came and raided the village he thought his lab was safe. Then there was a knock at the door valawxedit went to open the door then the door burst into splinters. then pirates ran in stealing all his weapons he managed to kill a few pirates then he got thrown out of his lab with a knife inbeded in his side. he wrenched the knife out of himself the blood dripping from the wound. he ran to the harbour with his basic tools and his most prized weapon. he saw the the flag had a anvil on it or what he thought was an anvil. he took some boxes of food and some bottles of water then he set sail on the south blue.

Personality:valawxedit is carefree but but since the attack he is also paranoid.he can be serious when he needs to be.valawxedit is also very creative he creates tools and weapons in his lab. he can also be independant and can look after himself. hes very untidy and he wont tidy unless forced.

Ship:N/A

Flag:N/A

Devil fruit:none

main skills:stealth,speed and intelligece

Learned Techniques:
steel barrage the feathers(caltrops)on his wings unlock when his wings beat the feathers fly at the enermies
flame breath burns enemies in front of him ,
drill punch, blades on wrist rotate as he punches
blade throw,
flame beam the oil from flame breath get more concentrated

weapons:
meachanical wings,
throwing knives,
four blades attached on each wrist,
mechanical flame breath (two tube one puts out oil and the other tube give out a flame)
long rifle
smoke bombs
vial of experimental chemicals (sometimes burns, poisons, shocks or nothing)
experimental three barrled pistols which shoot out random gun rounds (lighting,poison,bullet,nothing or all three)

Goal:to become the best inventor

You have to post all your unique weapons, explain your techniques, and you need more detail in apperance, personality, and history.

I would also like to add the strawhat pirates dont exist (not yet) in this rp, and as major already said you need way more detail

sorry it was my first character

its ok, we are here to help you,you need to type alot, be descriptive and put detail , about 10 sentences for history, try that first.

Name:valawxedit

Age:14

Bounty:3,000,000

Species:Human

Allegiance:dont care

Home Village/Ocean:south blue

Appearance:average height, skinny, red top and hood bottom ruined ,purple seramic mask, metal gauntlets, leg plates and boots (avatar)

History:he lived on a island just of coast of karate island in lab all he did was experiment with gunpowder and oil. but a year after he moved there his parent died at sea. he inherited the lab and some money to keep him going. but three years later pirates came and raided the village he thought his lab was safe. Then there was a knock at the door valawxedit went to open the door then the door burst into splinters. then the pirates ran in steal all my weapons he managed to kill a few pirates then he got thrown out of his lab with a knife inbeded in his side. he wrenched the knife out of himself the blood dripping from the wound. he ran to the harbour with his basic tools and his most prized weapon. he saw the the flag had a anvil on it or what he thought was an anvil. he took some boxes of food and some bottles of water then he set sail on the south blue.

Personality:carefree, but can be serious and a bit paranoid

Ship:frigate

Flag:N/A

Devil fruit:none

Special Abilities: stealth, mind and speed

Learned Techniques:
flame breath burns enemies in front of him ,
drill punch, blades on wrist rotate as he punches
blade throw,
flame beam the oil from flame breath get more concentrated

weapons:
throwing knives,
four blades attached on each wrist,
mechanical flame breath (two tube one puts out oil and the other tube give out a flame)
long rifle

Goal:to become the best inventor

hmmmm,your getting there but not yet , your appearance has to be more,let me give you an example
https://theonepiecerp.rpg-board.net/character-creation-f2/sir-zero-a-government-assassin-t1836.htm

Name:valawxedit

Age:14

Bounty:3,000,000

Species:Human

Allegiance:dont care

Home Village/Ocean:south blue

Appearance:average height about 5'2", skinny medium build, red top and hood bottom ruined, belts on the arms and stitching on the hood ,purple seramic mask or beige floral design mask when not wearing mask blue eyes long black hair with red streaks, metal gauntlets, leg plates and boots

History:he lived on a island just of coast of karate island in lab all he did was experiment with gunpowder and oil. but a year after he moved there his parent died at sea. he inherited the lab and some money to keep him going. but three years later pirates came and raided the village he thought his lab was safe. Then there was a knock at the door valawxedit went to open the door then the door burst into splinters. then the pirates ran in steal all my weapons he managed to kill a few pirates then he got thrown out of his lab with a knife inbeded in his side. he wrenched the knife out of himself the blood dripping from the wound. he ran to the harbour with his basic tools and his most prized weapon. he saw the the flag had a anvil on it or what he thought was an anvil. he took some boxes of food and some bottles of water then he set sail on the south blue.

Personality:carefree, but can be serious and a bit paranoid

Ship:frigate

Flag:N/A

Devil fruit:none

Special Abilities: stealth, mind and speed

Learned Techniques:
flame breath burns enemies in front of him ,
drill punch, blades on wrist rotate as he punches
blade throw,
flame beam the oil from flame breath get more concentrated

weapons:
throwing knives,
four blades attached on each wrist,
mechanical flame breath (two tube one puts out oil and the other tube give out a flame)
long rifle

Goal:to become the best inventor

ok your very close,the only thing you have to do now,is expand on personalty, 4 sentences should be ok , also put all this in the fist post.

You have to submit both the mechanical flame breath and the wrist blades to the weapons section before approval.

have done

improve on your personality

APPROVED

you have done well Valawexdit, you may begin

Thank you for all your help

well sorry to interupt you nik, but I wanted to ask how the stealth works, and how he uses it

stealth is used to get near undetectible before a fight to get an ambush or to avoid a fight it can be used in a fight if the enermy cant see the character or already has a good hiding spot.

he is correct, my first character Pyriss also uses this.