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sethdeath

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PostSubject: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeSun May 03, 2009 6:20 pm

weapon name: sunshine and eclipes
description: sunshine: a katana that is 5 ft long, the handle is blue and the blade is gold a chain on the bottom has a sun on it
eclipes: a midevel longsword that is 5 and a half ft long, everything, from handle to blade, is black. also a chain on the bottom of this one is a black sun
weapon special abilities: sunshine: handle filled with flamable licuid (my charecter will have flammable gloves and matches) to make a flamable sword
eclipes: none
history: The two swords were made to be convined with one user. But in the begining, it was split between two people. it went through many users the last was named jaden, who's ship mysterisly sunk


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PostSubject: Re: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeSun May 03, 2009 6:22 pm

What kmind of medievel sword? There's longswords, broadswords, rapiers were towards renesainssnce.
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PostSubject: Re: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeSun May 03, 2009 6:23 pm

its a long sword
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PostSubject: Re: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeSun May 03, 2009 6:26 pm

Okay then. Include that. No admins are on at the moment, so please be patient.
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PostSubject: Re: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeSun May 03, 2009 6:45 pm

explain the special abilities or delete them (key why is it that you get to very single new topic before an admin who is actually SUPPOSE to be administrating)
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PostSubject: Re: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeSun May 03, 2009 6:54 pm

I dunno. I'm trying to help...
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PostSubject: Re: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeSun May 03, 2009 6:56 pm

okay then, lets recap

Seth: explain the abilities or delete them

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PostSubject: Re: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeMon May 04, 2009 6:17 pm

I fixed it
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PostSubject: Re: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeMon May 04, 2009 6:20 pm

you changed them but did not explain HOW they are doing what they do
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PostSubject: Re: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeMon May 04, 2009 7:55 pm

I fixed it again
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PostSubject: Re: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeMon May 04, 2009 7:58 pm

"since the two swords were both weilded by different people, the came to have different powers"

swords are not magical sponges that get abilities from users over periods of time "because"
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PostSubject: Re: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeMon May 04, 2009 8:18 pm

ok, all fix it
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PostSubject: Re: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeMon May 04, 2009 8:20 pm

could you tell me what you changed? (cant see it)
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PostSubject: Re: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeMon May 04, 2009 8:23 pm

I just finished
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PostSubject: Re: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeMon May 04, 2009 8:24 pm

Admin-sama wrote:
could you tell me what you changed? (cant see it)
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PostSubject: Re: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeMon May 04, 2009 8:29 pm

"that was because, right before he died, using a strang power he got from the devil himself, he fused himself with his sword"
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PostSubject: Re: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeMon May 04, 2009 8:32 pm

that is FAR to out of context, if you want to write with out having to stay in one piece terms perhaps you should make your own book/manga/anime/vidogame/rp
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PostSubject: Re: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeMon May 04, 2009 8:34 pm

Ok All just go make a different special abillity
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PostSubject: Re: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeMon May 04, 2009 8:37 pm

why not have the sword split apart (IE Ivy's sword from soul caliber) but loaded with kerosene that leeks out when opened and can be lit with a fireproof glove for the user to achieve the first sword....?
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PostSubject: Re: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeMon May 04, 2009 8:52 pm

i fixed it
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PostSubject: Re: sunshine and eclipes   sunshine and eclipes Icon_minitimeMon May 04, 2009 8:56 pm

APPROVED ((though only one of those was a "fix" the correct term is "edit"))
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